![Click to change the View Light of the Gods Below (First Draft) [Clean Story]](http://d.furaffinity.net/art/thornbrier/stories/1488278723/1360274754.thumbnail.thornbrier_light_of_the_gods_below.rtf.gif)
This is the first draft of a multi-generation story for a world I have been working on. It has a couple of perspectives to hit various points in history. Topics to expect are religious views and clashes, alien culture, symbiotic species, tentacles (yes, tentacles in a clean story), intimidation, and historical references to war and genocide.
The Pangorath aliens are based on the real species Pangolin (I mention for all you pangolin lovers out there) with a few alterations, such as their ears. I am working on getting a picture of my Pangorath engineer character.
I would very much like to have any feedback you can give.
You can also find this story (with any updates before I republish) on Google Drive: https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....9ltFPfymw/edit
The Pangorath aliens are based on the real species Pangolin (I mention for all you pangolin lovers out there) with a few alterations, such as their ears. I am working on getting a picture of my Pangorath engineer character.
I would very much like to have any feedback you can give.
You can also find this story (with any updates before I republish) on Google Drive: https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....9ltFPfymw/edit
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Alien (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 36 kB
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