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XDragoon 22 is now fully online!
Chapter 23 is the start of the series climax! Rocky and Alar fight continues and Fei will arrive in the Casulo! Stay tuned!!
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XDragoon #22: Phillip vs. Hammer. Round 2!
Script, Art and Colors: Felipe Marcantonio
Translation Revision: Jim Eriksson
Pages: 48
December 2012
ENGLISH
http://xdragoon.com/comics/en/022/index.php
PORTUGUESE
http://xdragoon.com/comics/pt/022/index.php
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/xdragoon
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/pages/XDrag.....90397107674496
XDragoon 22 is now fully online!
Chapter 23 is the start of the series climax! Rocky and Alar fight continues and Fei will arrive in the Casulo! Stay tuned!!
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XDragoon #22: Phillip vs. Hammer. Round 2!
Script, Art and Colors: Felipe Marcantonio
Translation Revision: Jim Eriksson
Pages: 48
December 2012
ENGLISH
http://xdragoon.com/comics/en/022/index.php
PORTUGUESE
http://xdragoon.com/comics/pt/022/index.php
Category All / All
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 900 x 1165px
File Size 245 kB
Page 30:
"Valuable info doesn't come easy!" (info is a singular word)
Page 31:
"I have been waiting for you..."
Page 37:
"He's still on a far inferior level."
Page 40:
"Can't detect any smell..." (this was an odd phrase originally since you can't hear smells)
Page 41:
You might want to consider a period between "deceased" and "his" instead of a comma. Otherwise it becomes a run-on.
Page 43:
"You cannot let the Morphs erase it!" (isn't this still Krad talking? "I" makes no sense here then.)
Page 45:
The final phrase would probably sound better as "It's coming from Rocky!" instead of "It comes from Rocky!"
Page 47:
I'm a litte confused as to what Hea means by "I've better rather..."
"Valuable info doesn't come easy!" (info is a singular word)
Page 31:
"I have been waiting for you..."
Page 37:
"He's still on a far inferior level."
Page 40:
"Can't detect any smell..." (this was an odd phrase originally since you can't hear smells)
Page 41:
You might want to consider a period between "deceased" and "his" instead of a comma. Otherwise it becomes a run-on.
Page 43:
"You cannot let the Morphs erase it!" (isn't this still Krad talking? "I" makes no sense here then.)
Page 45:
The final phrase would probably sound better as "It's coming from Rocky!" instead of "It comes from Rocky!"
Page 47:
I'm a litte confused as to what Hea means by "I've better rather..."
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