Ok so honest opinions on this style of art? I have never done one like this but I really like the water paint comic book look... This is a very quick basic drawing I did on photoshop. Earlier today I spent all day working on another one that I don't even like (I'm still going to post it).... 9 times out of 10 I don't like what I draw.

I am writing (attempting to at least) a novel about an Orc mercenary that is hired to kidnap the emperors daughter who is a dark elf. They fall in love bla bla bla

Anyways I want to write this novel and have illustrations included. So every couple pages there will be comic strips of something I want people to see not just read. So I am working on a good art style for it and this is kinda what I am leaning towards...

What do you think?