Thought I've been out of the most recent, but I do remember this one, heh, a great story, and I bet the ones I mist are only better. *nod*

Indeed, they get much better. ;)

Very nice, I look forward to more.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm certain you'll enjoy the next few chapters as I post them. :3

Nice chapter. I'll have to read the other ones now and the ones to come.

*nod nod* Yay! :3

That Chapter is a good one. I love Buizel (and Charmander ^^) too, so I can't wait to read more storys from you. :)

Woohoo, I am glad that you enjoyed! :3 I, too, like Charmanders, but they are a lot more common to find in stories than Buizels are. ^^;

DAMN! That sucked for poor Tommy! I hope his Pokémon are OK, but it doesn't look good..... Good start to what promises to be a great series, though!!

There's no questioning the level of suck in regards to losing not only your parents, but your trusty Pokemon as well. Not saying that they're all dead, but as you said, it doesn't look good for any of them, or Tommy for that matter. Believe me, though, the future chapters help bring it all together! :3

I really like the whole of 'Middle of nowhere'.
It was also the very first adult pokemon story I have ever read. (^_^)

That's awesome, and really awesome that it was your first, too. ^^

Oooooooo! This has the makings of a good story! Gotta read the rest, now!

Awesome! Someone who loves Buizel as much as I do! High-five!

Wow! One chapter and I'm hooked I look forward to reading more

Cool; haven't read very much stuff this interesting [from the start], hope the next part's up when I've finished posting this comment :

Well this sucks... I can't read the rest of this story due to age restrictions... I'm only off by 13 months. Ah well. Expect comments in 13 months. This is a really interesting beginning, I must say. About the adult nature of the story: I'm not opposed to it, but I guess I don't care for it either. I just aim for if I like the characters. And a Buizel is a character I can get behind.

This is gonna be a long 13 months...

Aww, shoot heh. Well hopefully the story will be finished or something by then, so then you'll be able to enjoy it to its fullest. ^^ There's another Buizel story of mine that you'd probably get quite a kick out of. Honestly I like the characters in it even better, but it's a lot deeper. Remind me to tell you in a year. :P

It isn't done? Well, that's the silver lining in the clouds of the waiting. How much of it is done and what's this other Buizel story you got going on?

Nope, it's only up to Chapter 14, with a good 10+ chapters still to go.

The other story starring Buizels is called Fleeting Friendship. It's cute, but also pretty damn emotional, haha. I prefer it to Middle of Nowhere personally. ^^;

Whoa, 14 chapters and it's got 10 or more. I gotta say that is REALLY impressive. I could never accomplish that. And that other story I will admit, I'm a sucker for emotional reads. And how long is that story? Got any other stories? I can't see your full gallery.
One more thing: Sorry 'bout all these questions. I have a tendency to ask a hell of a lot of 'em. But I can't just see for myself. I think that 18 age rule is kinda stupid. I've taken sophmore health, I know how things work, and I still have to wait 2 more years. Ah well, best not to go against it.

I agree, the whole law thing is pretty stupid to be perfectly honest. It's not like really anyone follows it anyway, lol, but it certainly doesn't prevent anything because most teens these days are cooked up in all sorts of shenanigans far beyond porn.

But I'm not one to really argue it nowadays.

Point is, particularly with stories, it's a lot harder to define what is and isn't pornography. I could actually censor out the explicit scenes (which are actually written tastefully as opposed to using a lot of vulgar words) from Fleeting Friendship and pass it as a PG-13 story. Ha. That one and another one, Her Biggest Fan, would both work well like that.

Oh, I do remember one story that you can actually read now! Well, all but the last two chapters, but certainly enough to give you an entertaining read. Go ahead and check out Waxing Moon over on SoFurry.com. Here's a link: http://zephyr-paws.sofurry.com/stories

There's nothing explicit in any of the chapters you'll see over there unless you have an account that's over 18 and has the adult filter off, so you'll be able to read them at least. ^^; Chapter 7 isn't even really that bad to be honest ― I don't even know why I marked it adult. They didn't even really do anything.

I'm following that rule... And you have no reason to argue it, your exempt from it lol. Well thanks for that link for something else to for me to read. BTW, that pic by your name, why'd you change it from a cute, happy, bouncing Buizel to a dark, menacing Sneasel?

For some reason when reading what the captain said it flashed titanic in 5 seconds before me.

I like the beginning of the story actually, it's very well done, the scene with Buizel there is great so far. I kinda liked more the fact of a Pokémon not knowing about the human stuff, I've seen lots of Pokémon that actually know these things in other stories and it scares me.

well although you say that is gets "adult themed" further ahead, I might read it some time, it got me hooked up and besides it's not like I'm going to die if I do so (althrough I may get traumatized depending on certain stuff.)

I think I may unblock the adult filter again.

Ah, well I'm glad that the first bit appealed to you at the very least. A lot of people tend to like this story, but it's still one of my earliest works, which means that it's... ah, I dunno, a little sketchy plot-wise sometimes in my opinion.

Well regardless of what you decide to do, I hope that it's enjoyable. ^^;

hey, nothing like your first works! I still look back at my older drawings =P Your first works are the one that gave you that special impulse ^^

in the end I will have to unblock the adult filter anyway because I'm going to start to put some bloody drawings already. So I might go ahead and read at least a couple of chapters.