They are too bara, to unrealistically buff and the pecs look like breasts. the line work is great.
Now I understand the bara and the tit pec stuff is a thing, and there is a want for it. But is there a possibility for a hybrid?

I love Shou and Viggatos due to their twin dicks, but King is kinda...meh. King is too ordinary

Ren is not bad, could use some work on his hind legs though

can you explain more on the legs? do you mean like work out more?

The portion below the knees are super short compared to the portion above the knees. I can send you some pics on how to draw horse hind legs which you can send Maldu

I never knew a lot about them, I do wanna know about their story and character development if that’s okay

I do plan on making a little ref card thing for each, or later today when I get home you can ask me stuff on telegram to get to know them better

Good idea

I always thought King was a good "Face" for this account even if he's a bit bland. He could use a bit of something to make him feel a bit more distinct.

Sho is kinda generic feeling too as far as dragons are concerned. The color palate is one I could find all around the place on a dragon. The twin cocks thing is pretty interesting though.

Viggatos and Ren fall into the same camp of "Kinda generic but alright." Black, demonic looking rams and horses are a trope well worn but for good reason because it works.

Overall, the thing these characters need most of all is more personality. More chances to stand out, more moments of character interaction.

Ive been thinking of changing King a bit, but just have no idea what to do

Shou I kinda stole from a tv show tbh (it was love at first sight) and I did try to change him at one point but it wasnt the dragon I liked

Viggs (a demon bear) was at first made from DnD where a brown bear and a balor demon merged. and since I thought red would of been a odd color I went with black, since black bears are a thing

and lastly Ren I got inspiration for him thanks to the horse "Snowball" from the hunchback of Notre Dame

Based on their looks alone? I'd say they're all good looking imo.

King: While on the standard side, he's still a really good looking liger. Love his chest hair and his mane having those nice braids on it.

Shou: Dragons are always great. Love his double dicks and his scaly beard, along with his awesome gold tipped horns.

Viggatos: A great demon goat look on him. That ruby/gem in the middle of his forehead is pretty cool.

Ren: I'd say he's really similar to Viggatos, expect he's a horse demon with red eyes instead of blue. Still great looking though.

I think While Viggatos and Ren look the same, they have opposite personalities. Viggs is more laid back and even more "submissive" when it comes to things while Ren is in charge and you damn well know it

I think each character is good but could use something to give them more personality. Most all of kind give off the typical bara character you see in media. There nothing there that makes me think they can stand on their own in my opinion

to me, they do have different personalities but I know I'm horrible at showing them lol. King is the "all around guy". Shou has a lot of confidence but in a "walks the walk" way. Viggs is that meme "Looks like he can kill but really is a cinnamon bun" and Ren is the opposite of Viggs

I'd recommend focusing trying to have their personalities shown off more. Not every piece of art has to be jerk off material. Like think how would each character react in this situation. Also I think King design is good but it feels like it's missing something to a degree

Viggatos looks good, and I like his three eyes. I love the texture and colors. His eyes look oddly cross-eyed, though. His left eye seems to be looking as far to the right as he can, like at something at his nose, while his right eye is looking to his left, though not as much, like casually.

All the designs look great in my apion with their builds and sizes