Dark Poison
4 years ago
Hello All!
Well my recent life transition is paying off.
I have returned to the state I love and the old house feels great.
Best of all, I now have all the time I need to write. Not just quick stories, though I enjoy those too! But I have time to write the deeply erotic, wonderfully intimate works I want to be known for.
And so I now hope to build a new career for myself as a writer of powerfully erotic stories. They will start as Fur based stories. But I hope to write human stories here too. Some may even make a transition to both worlds.
But enough of me and my dreams- WHAT ABOUT THE STORY?!?
Here is the link: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/44890295/
That will take you to the reworked Prologue. Have no fear, Nomark will make his appearance. But it will be in hot pants as a rock star this time. (Well not yet, but he has a bright future!)
The story begins hot and gets hotter, as a poor Stallion loses his mind to a Mare bent upon breaking him to her service- and to the service of her Master- the Dark Poison...
Please do leave a comment if you like it! If you have a criticism, especially with an idea to make it better, you may leave that too. But don't be weenie about it. Anyone can be negative- it takes no special talent.
Well my recent life transition is paying off.
I have returned to the state I love and the old house feels great.
Best of all, I now have all the time I need to write. Not just quick stories, though I enjoy those too! But I have time to write the deeply erotic, wonderfully intimate works I want to be known for.
And so I now hope to build a new career for myself as a writer of powerfully erotic stories. They will start as Fur based stories. But I hope to write human stories here too. Some may even make a transition to both worlds.
But enough of me and my dreams- WHAT ABOUT THE STORY?!?
Here is the link: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/44890295/
That will take you to the reworked Prologue. Have no fear, Nomark will make his appearance. But it will be in hot pants as a rock star this time. (Well not yet, but he has a bright future!)
The story begins hot and gets hotter, as a poor Stallion loses his mind to a Mare bent upon breaking him to her service- and to the service of her Master- the Dark Poison...
Please do leave a comment if you like it! If you have a criticism, especially with an idea to make it better, you may leave that too. But don't be weenie about it. Anyone can be negative- it takes no special talent.
V.
I am working with an artist to create a picture for each chapter. Soon, you will see the Poisoned Mare in all her wicked glory. For the picture for this prologue chapter is her looking back at the viewer... Her tail raised, she openly seduces her Stallion to come close. Her scent beckons and the Dark Poison in her marvels at the strength of a Mare over her Stallion. Yes the good love between a Mare and a Stallion is now used for corruption.
Meanwhile, back on the farm, the author types away at the next chapter of the Legend of Nomark.
I can't tell you the feeling of optimism I have now, for words fail me. For the first time in decades I am free to actually submerge myself into a project. That was something I simply could not do before, though I longed to. I took a photo yesterday and noticed that I had no dark bags and circles under my eyes! It has been years since I saw a healthy face looking staring back at me.
Thank you for understanding. This community has been far kinder to me than my own family has.
But with my newfound "sobriety" no longer clouded by a toxic relationship, I realize I have to focus on projects that I am capable of completing. Even the best artists here started out lowly with only their talent. But they did something that has propelled them into their well earned status. That something was to focus on at most a handful of things- and do them well.
For me, that comes down to two stories.
The first is the one noted above. It is a Pony-esk world. It's not for profit, as I have no desire to be sued by My Little Pony- Lawyers Are Magic. (But MLP does seem to be most tolerant of the fiction their followers generate.)
Let's face it, MLP is popular. And being a Horse fan myself, it is most easy for me to write about. It is a world that lends itself to erotic fictions of the best kind.
I see this world through a prism that splits the Pony image in two. On the light side, you have all that Pony folk would call good and right.
But on the darker side are the hidden desires that are repressed.
In public, all is sweetness and light. Ponies overcome evil with friendship, understanding and love.
But in private, the Pony mind dwells of what their society deems taboo acts. These forbidden lusts lie just beneath the surface... threatening to corrupt many a good Pony.
It's a delicious world in which Ponies may fail to uphold the standards they strive for- and the desire grows stronger to simply abandon themselves to the darkers role their other half seeks. Frankly, it reminds me of the Victorian era in England. On the surface, all is right. But just below is a world of addictions, seductions and deeply repressed desires.
And a new pressure from without. The Changelings have tasted of the hidden desires and unfulfilled loves of Ponies- and found them most delicious. They now must have more of the food they have discovered in the loves of a Pony. For not only is it a nutritious food that enables their pretense of any Pony, it is a decadent drug they find most seductive.
Therefore the Queen and her Hive now build a special force specifically to seduce Ponies into exploring forbidden loves and taboo acts. The food of pure bliss in a Ponies enjoyment of such things, combined with their tremendous guilt afterwards, creates the delicious food and drug the Hie needs more of.
Who can say then that any particular Pony is not one of these powerful Changelings- there to suck the emotions from good Pony folk?
Mmmmmmffff, it is a great tale of lusts, taboo desires and forbidden acts- and their enjoyment. As well as the breaking of good Ponies and their wills.
As to the other storyline, the world of The Betters is just that- so much better. There is no guilt, only the enjoyment of love, bliss, friendship and erotic service to what many call a saviour race. The race known as The Betters.
With these opposite stories that overlap like a venn diagram in the middle, I hope to realize my ability in erotic writing.
And I thank you all for your loving support. I have mot had friends such as you for a very long time. Thank you all.
You have taken a lot of big steps forward and though you may trip and stumble you are still moving forward, we all have to even if it's not easy it's important to make a better life for ourselves.
And this is the great thing about the fandoms and why it's so amazing, there are many layers, each delving deeper and deeper to suit different tastes and needs. Even the MLP has a wide array of fans and too those who have similar interests, seek it out and find treasures like yourself. You don't have to worry about the ones who don't care for it as they simply don't look for it.
Your writing is a way to express yourself and what you love, To craft a story that you desire and change fate from what you seen and read else were to what you want it to be, and like myself, I enjoy seeing what you desire from this story and I cant wait to read, hopefully within the next few days when I have that extra free time to BUTT I will do non the less. taboo, desires, and forbidden acts, you have ticked a lot of boxes for things I like. =^.^=
I am not the most knowledgeable about MLP but with my preference for things big and round even I enjoy looking at what's to offer in the MLP fanbase I can't say no to Fluttershy...In fact only a few weeks ago I had commissioned myself to be a MLP or should I say I wanted to see Ponut Liru 💜 I will pop a note at some point with that as it's not something that I will up publicly for a while.