Don't expect too much, I'm kinda dumb, and I don't have much experience writing things like this, that are actually organized and longer than about a page-

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"This wasn't supposed to happen, I'm so sorry Rose...!"
(My experiment had gone wrong. She wasn't supposed to be this self aware. She was supposed to be..happier, as a Pokémon...)
"WHAT DID YOU DO?!"
"I dunno, Rose. That's the issue."
(My lips felt parched, and dry as I said that."
"WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME, ASHTON?!"
"You were supposed to transfer minds with your sylveon, but instead, it seems you both physically merged somehow. I suppose next time I'll have to create a separate chamber.."
"YOU MAKE A MISTAKE, AND TURN ME I TO SOME HALF-BREED CREATURE, AND YOU'RE PLANNING YOUR NEXT EXPERIMENT?"
"It's to prevent this from occuring again!"
(Tears began to form in her eyes..Jesus, I'm sorry Rose.)
"PLEASE, HELP ME ASH! I DON'T WANT TO BE LIKE THIS!"
"I'm sorry Rose, I don't...I don't know how."
"ASH, PLEASE!"
(I exhaled.)
"ROSE, I CAN'T!"
(She stared at me for a few seconds, and then she starts crying.)
"Rose, please-"
(A soft, pink, blue and white ribbon snaked around my wrist.)
"A-ash.."
(I began to feel..slower. I began to feel overwhelming relief.)
"What...? What are you doing....?"
(I pulled the ribbon off, and semi-glared at her.)
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So yeah, that's the end of page one-
Feel free to crucify my through the comments, make suggestions, or mention something you liked!

I have no clue if that looks good at the end, but that's what those other writers put down on their stories-