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Completing Unfinished Buisness: "Diaper For Teacher" In N...
3 years ago
I was looking through my stories that have been sitting in hiatus and remembered "Diaper For Teacher" had been in that pile for awhile now. I wanted to change it's status from 'Hiatus' to 'Complete' and move on, but the story's not quite at a good ending point. I know I'm not the best at wrapping things up in a nice neat bow, but for this story I wanted to attempt a clean ending before moving on.
So I was wondering. Is there any story left to tell between Big Mcintosh and Cheerliee? They've both gotten equal helpings of school play and diapers, so I'm not sure where else to take the story. However Cheerliee JUST got double diapered and thematically it feels like that's setting things up for something. But again, I don't know what else to add.
What does everyone else think?
So I was wondering. Is there any story left to tell between Big Mcintosh and Cheerliee? They've both gotten equal helpings of school play and diapers, so I'm not sure where else to take the story. However Cheerliee JUST got double diapered and thematically it feels like that's setting things up for something. But again, I don't know what else to add.
What does everyone else think?
It’s a good read and its amusing to see them going back and forth with each other. You do make a good point about Cheerilee being double diapered. I think she’s done being a teacher for the rest of the day!
I though up two more unique scenes/things for them to do and an epilogue if you’d like me to share details.
I think one last bit of back and forth should happen where Cheerilee has to go outside in just her diapers. Something like recess where she has to go play in the sandbox, swings, or slide. I saw you had this set on a Saturday Afternoon at the start of the story. I think enough time has passed for it to be late and dark enough for her to not get seen. That and Big Mac got away with it earlier! Would be a good way for her to fully go down the path to being a foal. Big Mac could be watching from the schoolhouse, taking note when she pee’s herself again.
Another idea would be the two of them doing some hoof painting on some posters. Have them paint each other, they both draw each other in massive diapers. Extra silly part would be writing the Mr. and Mrs. teacher parts to the art. At some point I think Cheerilee would start to use Big Mac’s diaper as canvas as well, would be a good way to get Big Mac double diapered, just cover the painted one!
For a little Epilogue having the two of them sitting together, looking over the classroom. They decide to finish off the special cookies and decide to see who can hold the longest. Loser has to pick everything up, gets a spanking, or some other punishment for losing. I think it would be a good idea to not tell the viewer who loses. Let them decide!
Let me know what you think! Been fun thinking these ideas up.
Might be the little scenes I need to break through this writer's block. Thank you very much for your input!
Let me know if you need help with your other stories!