Anyone Interested in Reading a Rough Draft?
3 years ago
Inspired by stories set in the cool universe created by
hetzer, tried my hand... attempted to make my own story set in his universe.
Probably bungled everything up, probably screwing up some of the lore... but hope it's good. It's about a human who had lived through the initial conflict (Earth invaded by Giant Anthro Aliens, which was won by those allied with humanity) being paired up with a member of the race that had invaded his homeworld.
A bit different than my usual stuff, tried to really make the human's experiences during the war be pretty scarring. Probably suck at it, probably very cringe and angsty. Well... let me know. Comments and Critique welcome. >_<;;;
https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing

Probably bungled everything up, probably screwing up some of the lore... but hope it's good. It's about a human who had lived through the initial conflict (Earth invaded by Giant Anthro Aliens, which was won by those allied with humanity) being paired up with a member of the race that had invaded his homeworld.
A bit different than my usual stuff, tried to really make the human's experiences during the war be pretty scarring. Probably suck at it, probably very cringe and angsty. Well... let me know. Comments and Critique welcome. >_<;;;
https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....it?usp=sharing
Of course, this will be on the minds of the occupying ‘peaceful’ force, so they make the service to rehabilitate the humans, they create rules so that the macros seem less frightening. However, you mention the macro that didn’t, that they picked up their human without consent since it probably felt natural and the reaction of a disgruntled human didn’t stick to a macro who should already know they are breaking the rules of cooperation precautions… thus he ends up with a blade in his paw (which I wouldn’t be quite so eager to do, they may just crush you flat for the effort) and leaves the human in this story scared and distrustful, to be gradually rehabilitated by one with the most awkward background to be interfacing with said human, but with, apparently, a heart of gold I would wish him luck.