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Updates 2: Humble Pie & Ego Fuel
3 years ago
My second story has been updated and improved, so if you haven't read "The Garage Guillotine" in a while, maybe give it a look! https://www.furaffinity.net/view/40503375/
That said, unlike with Head for the Headless, which I had to effectively rewrite line by line due to how badly it held up, the updates on this story were minimal. I'm gonna be honest... I think I've been way too hard on both this story, and the slackjawed know-nothing lowest common denominator cretins who actually liked it. While I always considered this story one of my weaker ones, on account of it being super vanilla and overdone, I feel like the writing actually kinda compensates for how cliché it is. I'm not normally one to pat myself on the back, but I can't help but feel like I may have actually kind of done a better job on this one than I had initially thought. While there were a handful of awkward sentences and a few minor typos, it was otherwise solid, I think.
Gonna be honest with you all, this is kind of a new feeling for me. Re-reading something I made a long time ago and actually thinking it's good. It's a nice feeling. I'm sorry if that's conceited of me to say, but judging by how this story CRUSHES all my other stories in faves, I doubt many people would disagree that this one is actually alright.
That said, unlike with Head for the Headless, which I had to effectively rewrite line by line due to how badly it held up, the updates on this story were minimal. I'm gonna be honest... I think I've been way too hard on both this story, and the slackjawed know-nothing lowest common denominator cretins who actually liked it. While I always considered this story one of my weaker ones, on account of it being super vanilla and overdone, I feel like the writing actually kinda compensates for how cliché it is. I'm not normally one to pat myself on the back, but I can't help but feel like I may have actually kind of done a better job on this one than I had initially thought. While there were a handful of awkward sentences and a few minor typos, it was otherwise solid, I think.
Gonna be honest with you all, this is kind of a new feeling for me. Re-reading something I made a long time ago and actually thinking it's good. It's a nice feeling. I'm sorry if that's conceited of me to say, but judging by how this story CRUSHES all my other stories in faves, I doubt many people would disagree that this one is actually alright.
