On upcoming bio rewrites
3 years ago
As I mentioned in this journal, I have some character bios I'll be rewriting. These are for a number of reasons: some inconsistencies and plotholes bug me, some lore's been changed, and some are just too old. So... who's being changed?
Basically any Mentali pre-Fortuna - Man, I wasn't good at hiding that I was the creator of Mentali, was I? And there are some things I really need to change to fit more with Mentali...
Blaire - I've been thinking of turning her into a 'sona, so I want to expand her bio out a bit more and give her more of a backstory. She now has hobbies, and an actual relationship!
Nim - She's my main inflation OC now, I need to add more to flesh her out. (Done! I've rewritten her bio and expanded it a lot, adding a bit more on Estelle and noting that she's married to Nikki.)
Alyssa - I threw the bio together pretty quickly, my main OC deserves more.
Iona - Honestly... I'm not a fan of her gimmick. I have a new gimmick in mind for her... a bigger one.
Will - With Heather being someone else's OC with a different backstory now, I'll be changing Will a lot. He'll probably end up with Libero like Heather did.
Kristen - She's asexual, but sex makes her breasts grow. ...So how is she a hyper underneath her clothes, then? That's something I'll need to work on! (Plus, she has a sister! I gotta add that!)
Rayna - I've been thinking of changing her. I had the idea that she's a helium elemental in the form of a Latios, with a Mentali form she can shift to. She's still trans, since elementals can't change their genders at will, with a couple notable exceptions.
Alabaster - She's my first NSFW OC, I want to do more to make her... special. To set her apart, give her the inflation stuff other OCs of mine have, and more.
Basically any Mentali pre-Fortuna - Man, I wasn't good at hiding that I was the creator of Mentali, was I? And there are some things I really need to change to fit more with Mentali...
Blaire - I've been thinking of turning her into a 'sona, so I want to expand her bio out a bit more and give her more of a backstory. She now has hobbies, and an actual relationship!
Nim - She's my main inflation OC now, I need to add more to flesh her out. (Done! I've rewritten her bio and expanded it a lot, adding a bit more on Estelle and noting that she's married to Nikki.)
Alyssa - I threw the bio together pretty quickly, my main OC deserves more.
Iona - Honestly... I'm not a fan of her gimmick. I have a new gimmick in mind for her... a bigger one.
Will - With Heather being someone else's OC with a different backstory now, I'll be changing Will a lot. He'll probably end up with Libero like Heather did.
Kristen - She's asexual, but sex makes her breasts grow. ...So how is she a hyper underneath her clothes, then? That's something I'll need to work on! (Plus, she has a sister! I gotta add that!)
Rayna - I've been thinking of changing her. I had the idea that she's a helium elemental in the form of a Latios, with a Mentali form she can shift to. She's still trans, since elementals can't change their genders at will, with a couple notable exceptions.
Alabaster - She's my first NSFW OC, I want to do more to make her... special. To set her apart, give her the inflation stuff other OCs of mine have, and more.
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