Going through stories again!
3 years ago
General
Yesss, re-doing my old Mobian story again - Mr. Indecisive that I am, I want to come at it from a similar but much better angle: the perspective almost solely focused on Dynn, the titular character, with a bit more rampage and military porn to satisfy my aching heart. The original was just far too wordy, too much winding dialogue that drowned the pace and caused it to crawl like a one-legged crab through a lake of treacle.
I do hope to get it out soon - and I hope you'll enjoy it once you see it!
I do hope to get it out soon - and I hope you'll enjoy it once you see it!
ShadyDancer
~shadydancer
Glad to hear you’re back to it!
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