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2 years ago
Hello!
Just creating this journal as a heads up for anyone just checking out my page or if you’ve been enjoying my work so far to say that I’m very open to hear about what everyone thinks about my writing!
Whether it be general opinions and thoughts or feedback I would love to hear it!
It always makes me happy to interact with newcomers or watchers so send anything my way ^v^
Outside of that I am still working on narrative stuff so my next story should be out soon!
Just creating this journal as a heads up for anyone just checking out my page or if you’ve been enjoying my work so far to say that I’m very open to hear about what everyone thinks about my writing!
Whether it be general opinions and thoughts or feedback I would love to hear it!
It always makes me happy to interact with newcomers or watchers so send anything my way ^v^
Outside of that I am still working on narrative stuff so my next story should be out soon!
Goddamn_Bats
~goddamnbats
I really enjoyed the PheroCorp story, the chemical seems very fun to use. I'd like to see it get out to the broader community, maybe a modified or less permanent version that couples/groups could purchase for parties/intimate times!
Lucian
~joe13546
OP
This is actually something I was thinking about because I have been leaving my villain stories more open ended to potentially expand on them in the future or even leave it to the reader’s interpretation. The distribution and consumption of a low potency but still very feel good aerosol was on my mind if I were to write a continuation and perhaps I might eventually. Glad you liked the story! ^v^
Goddamn_Bats
~goddamnbats
Thanks for sharing your work and good on you for looking to try new plotlines, I look forward to reading them!
Graal
~gazingstar
I really like how you do induction scenes, especially the ones in your latest story! It's so good!
Lucian
~joe13546
OP
Thank you! I do think pacing and having some form of uniqueness is something that’s pretty important to work on when writing hypnosis and I’m glad I managed to make it work!
