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Lore of Mysticfell - Final Push
2 years ago
Hey, there everyone,
I just want to give you guys an update on Lore of Unity. Currently, I've finished chapters 32-33 and I'm starting work on Chapter 34. I plan to start posting the latest chapters near the end of the week, I'm just getting ahead of the curve ball since I'm working on Act 3 and the story is pretty fast-paced at this point. I actually don't want to stop writing since I'm having so much fun. Act 3 if you know is the most intense and climactic part of a story and it's where all of the character arcs come together.
Here is a sneak peek for those who like to read my journal post:
“Today we face an opponent who cares little about anyone but himself. Ommni was once one of us, a warrior light. But his heart fell to darkness and the Pokemon we once called friend is no more. Ommni wishes to steal the power of the Grass Plate and use its power to take over Mysticfell. We shall not allow him to get away with his plans.”
“That's right.” Sir Godfrey walks over to Kira and takes a knee. “You shall have my speed. I shall protect this region even if it means giving my life to it.”
“Thank you.” Kira turns fully towards everyone. “It is not my intention for the young Pokemon to fight in this battle but…it must come to it. I ask that you protect yourselves and should things turn south…run. Run and survive so you may fight another day.”
“It won’t come to that.” It was Chip who spoke, the Zorua steps forward. Meadow sensed his determination. It was burning like a great fight, not like the sun itself.
“We will succeed no matter what.”
“No truer words can be spoken.” Kira bows. “Spoken on like a true leader.” Kira raises his stick, and the flame at the end burned brightly. “Onwards we march. We shall bring light to the coming darkness.”
A cheer erupted all around as the Templars were ready for war. Hey head out and start marching towards the falls, everyone’s heads were high, and confidence seemed to radiate from them. As they reached the path leading up to the falls and the temple that was there Meadow felt an ominous feeling settle over her. She stops walking and looks around as if looking for something or rather someone.
~ Did you truly believe you could run from me? Your a fool for believing that you’ll stop me. The only happy ending anyone is going to have is mine. Observe. ~
Suddenly a dark mist settled over the area blocking out everyone’s visions. Meadow couldn’t see anything, not even her own paws in front of her. She felt cold, her fear seemed to be turning to ice. She couldn’t breathe, her lungs felt like they were becoming hot. Panic was taking over her mind. She shouldn’t have come here, Ommni he was too powerful…
Suddenly she felt something else enter her mind, a familiar presence was with her.
“Meadow, focus!” It was Delphine’s voice she heard through the darkness. “You can do this, you can fight through this. That bastard can’t win, you're stronger than him. A coward like he needs tricks to win. Your better than him!”
Meadow shakes her head, tears were falling from her face. She was so afraid. She wanted to ball up and just forget she was here. As she felt the hope within her nearly fade away she felt something touch her head. Looking up she saw Delphine there, the Ninetales was staring down at her.
“Delphine…” Meadow gasped. “Save me.”
“I can’t Meadow.” Delphine shakes her head. “Only you can do that. You must be the one to fight through this darkness. That light will never fade if you don’t allow it to. There is always hope even in the darkness.”
Meadow stops crying, a strange feeling grew inside of her. “There is always hope…” Meadow focused on those words and before she knew it the world began returning to normal, the mist faded away. As the mist faded Meadow saw that she was in front of the falls again, Delphine was not standing next to her but was up ahead with Kira. Before they a group of Deserters had confronted them.
“Move out the way or else,” Kira said, the Braixen pointed his stick at the group of rouge Pokemon. Meadow realized that it had all been a dream, even the part where Delphine had helped her. But how? Shaking her head the shaymin brushes off the feeling and races over to face the group. This was the beginning of the biggest battle of their lives.
As Meadow races over she feels cold once again. As she neared her friends the world seemly shattered and she was standing in the mist once more though this time she wasn’t alone. Ommni was standing there, the shadowy Alakazam was holding onto her neck. Meadow tried to let out a scream but nothing came out.
”There is no light of hope, only me and the endless darkness. I’m not even going to waste my time toying with you here.” Ommni says and Meadow feels the air being squeezed out of her. Meadow tries to scream again but this time there was no light of hope. The world began fading to darkness and soon Meadow was consumed by it.
Was this the end for her? She feels herself drop onto the ground, her body was motionless, and the energy she had was gone. Looking around she saw the others starting to fade away, as Meadow passes out.
That is a small taste of what is coming up soon.
I just want to give you guys an update on Lore of Unity. Currently, I've finished chapters 32-33 and I'm starting work on Chapter 34. I plan to start posting the latest chapters near the end of the week, I'm just getting ahead of the curve ball since I'm working on Act 3 and the story is pretty fast-paced at this point. I actually don't want to stop writing since I'm having so much fun. Act 3 if you know is the most intense and climactic part of a story and it's where all of the character arcs come together.
Here is a sneak peek for those who like to read my journal post:
“Today we face an opponent who cares little about anyone but himself. Ommni was once one of us, a warrior light. But his heart fell to darkness and the Pokemon we once called friend is no more. Ommni wishes to steal the power of the Grass Plate and use its power to take over Mysticfell. We shall not allow him to get away with his plans.”
“That's right.” Sir Godfrey walks over to Kira and takes a knee. “You shall have my speed. I shall protect this region even if it means giving my life to it.”
“Thank you.” Kira turns fully towards everyone. “It is not my intention for the young Pokemon to fight in this battle but…it must come to it. I ask that you protect yourselves and should things turn south…run. Run and survive so you may fight another day.”
“It won’t come to that.” It was Chip who spoke, the Zorua steps forward. Meadow sensed his determination. It was burning like a great fight, not like the sun itself.
“We will succeed no matter what.”
“No truer words can be spoken.” Kira bows. “Spoken on like a true leader.” Kira raises his stick, and the flame at the end burned brightly. “Onwards we march. We shall bring light to the coming darkness.”
A cheer erupted all around as the Templars were ready for war. Hey head out and start marching towards the falls, everyone’s heads were high, and confidence seemed to radiate from them. As they reached the path leading up to the falls and the temple that was there Meadow felt an ominous feeling settle over her. She stops walking and looks around as if looking for something or rather someone.
~ Did you truly believe you could run from me? Your a fool for believing that you’ll stop me. The only happy ending anyone is going to have is mine. Observe. ~
Suddenly a dark mist settled over the area blocking out everyone’s visions. Meadow couldn’t see anything, not even her own paws in front of her. She felt cold, her fear seemed to be turning to ice. She couldn’t breathe, her lungs felt like they were becoming hot. Panic was taking over her mind. She shouldn’t have come here, Ommni he was too powerful…
Suddenly she felt something else enter her mind, a familiar presence was with her.
“Meadow, focus!” It was Delphine’s voice she heard through the darkness. “You can do this, you can fight through this. That bastard can’t win, you're stronger than him. A coward like he needs tricks to win. Your better than him!”
Meadow shakes her head, tears were falling from her face. She was so afraid. She wanted to ball up and just forget she was here. As she felt the hope within her nearly fade away she felt something touch her head. Looking up she saw Delphine there, the Ninetales was staring down at her.
“Delphine…” Meadow gasped. “Save me.”
“I can’t Meadow.” Delphine shakes her head. “Only you can do that. You must be the one to fight through this darkness. That light will never fade if you don’t allow it to. There is always hope even in the darkness.”
Meadow stops crying, a strange feeling grew inside of her. “There is always hope…” Meadow focused on those words and before she knew it the world began returning to normal, the mist faded away. As the mist faded Meadow saw that she was in front of the falls again, Delphine was not standing next to her but was up ahead with Kira. Before they a group of Deserters had confronted them.
“Move out the way or else,” Kira said, the Braixen pointed his stick at the group of rouge Pokemon. Meadow realized that it had all been a dream, even the part where Delphine had helped her. But how? Shaking her head the shaymin brushes off the feeling and races over to face the group. This was the beginning of the biggest battle of their lives.
As Meadow races over she feels cold once again. As she neared her friends the world seemly shattered and she was standing in the mist once more though this time she wasn’t alone. Ommni was standing there, the shadowy Alakazam was holding onto her neck. Meadow tried to let out a scream but nothing came out.
”There is no light of hope, only me and the endless darkness. I’m not even going to waste my time toying with you here.” Ommni says and Meadow feels the air being squeezed out of her. Meadow tries to scream again but this time there was no light of hope. The world began fading to darkness and soon Meadow was consumed by it.
Was this the end for her? She feels herself drop onto the ground, her body was motionless, and the energy she had was gone. Looking around she saw the others starting to fade away, as Meadow passes out.
That is a small taste of what is coming up soon.
Ovamiat
~ovamiat
Idea: The Legacy of Bangham: basically a "collegiate" version of the Bangham Academy for those of middle-evolutionary forms (as to pay homage to the series that made you a legend in the first place)
Dogmatlw
~dogmatlw
OP
Hmm, thats not the worst idea. I might run with it. It is something worth posting on here. Ya thanks for the idea, I'll keep that in mind. I can do it on the side of my current project(s).
