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Some Story Canon Clean Up
2 years ago
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Truth be told I wanted to make some silly epilogue thing out of this but genuinely I just can't bring myself to.
So instead I'll simply put it here
For those who enjoyed my Clearspring works, Bittersweet Tales, Rekindling, and Traversing Boundaries
I have not spoken to others about all this, so whether or not its fact is really primarily up to
tastytales
But enough preamble, a short list.
- BST: Abigail's beloved human friend never dies. The elderly woman, specifically. It was done because a certain someone I had come to listen to freshly didn't like how Abigail was and that she was being written with too much 'niceness' for how evil she was. It was my fault for underestimating how bad she looked, but also I took that way too seriously and decided to make things worse for her just cause. Honestly a lot of stuff with her was completely ruined by that, but I worked with what I had done regardless. Were her friend to be alive now, she'd be free to leave Clearspring and come back as she pleases. And be a lot happier, too. Lumi would probably also follow her, guild-bound or not.
- BST: Emberflame changing color. This is just, I dunno what I was doing other than shoehorning it in lmao. I dunno what else I'd do but putting it here cause it irks me.
- BST: How Emberflame survived on Mt Coronet for some years... I dunno. Of all the ways to start a story, man I really chose a poor one. Maybe she had provisions? Maybe she just went feral as needed? I dunno. Maybe the mountain itself provided as a mystery dungeon.
- Rekindling: The entirety of the whole thing with the Luxray and the secret hideout. Dios mio. Just, beyond writer shame of which there is a lot, it did very little. I just wanted more characters and to show off one of my at the time favorites. If everyone else forgets it exists and never acknowledges it, fine by me.
- All three: Emberflame's various breakdowns, returns to Clearspring, and general crazed mental. Writer shame but also just like, real life writes the plot. The more I wrote Emberflame the more I discovered of myself and I kept using her as my vessel for it. Honestly it was a bit much imo.
Man I'm really getting off track.
But that is the majority of stuff that bothered me.
Poor Abby.
You never deserved it had I known how to write you better.
So instead I'll simply put it here
For those who enjoyed my Clearspring works, Bittersweet Tales, Rekindling, and Traversing Boundaries
I have not spoken to others about all this, so whether or not its fact is really primarily up to
tastytalesBut enough preamble, a short list.
- BST: Abigail's beloved human friend never dies. The elderly woman, specifically. It was done because a certain someone I had come to listen to freshly didn't like how Abigail was and that she was being written with too much 'niceness' for how evil she was. It was my fault for underestimating how bad she looked, but also I took that way too seriously and decided to make things worse for her just cause. Honestly a lot of stuff with her was completely ruined by that, but I worked with what I had done regardless. Were her friend to be alive now, she'd be free to leave Clearspring and come back as she pleases. And be a lot happier, too. Lumi would probably also follow her, guild-bound or not.
- BST: Emberflame changing color. This is just, I dunno what I was doing other than shoehorning it in lmao. I dunno what else I'd do but putting it here cause it irks me.
- BST: How Emberflame survived on Mt Coronet for some years... I dunno. Of all the ways to start a story, man I really chose a poor one. Maybe she had provisions? Maybe she just went feral as needed? I dunno. Maybe the mountain itself provided as a mystery dungeon.
- Rekindling: The entirety of the whole thing with the Luxray and the secret hideout. Dios mio. Just, beyond writer shame of which there is a lot, it did very little. I just wanted more characters and to show off one of my at the time favorites. If everyone else forgets it exists and never acknowledges it, fine by me.
- All three: Emberflame's various breakdowns, returns to Clearspring, and general crazed mental. Writer shame but also just like, real life writes the plot. The more I wrote Emberflame the more I discovered of myself and I kept using her as my vessel for it. Honestly it was a bit much imo.
Man I'm really getting off track.
But that is the majority of stuff that bothered me.
Poor Abby.
You never deserved it had I known how to write you better.
