Critique me please
16 years ago
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Hi everyone,
I, like most artists on this site, don't receive enough criticism. This is a request to critique my art more. This request is both specific and general - please tell me what you think needs improving in this journal, and also in future uploads.
I, like most artists on this site, don't receive enough criticism. This is a request to critique my art more. This request is both specific and general - please tell me what you think needs improving in this journal, and also in future uploads.
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Do another animation and ask for critiques then as that will give something specific for everyone to critique (and ask for it in the description - like what Grimm has been doing) It's probably better than asking for just general feedback in your entire archive.
It doesn't have to be huge, just something simple you think you might be lacking in or a simple loop so that others can look at it and figure it out for themselves.
In short, is there a particular piece you want critiqued?
My advice to you is, honestly, to rip and then watch high-class porn. The really good porn can afford to hire expensive, good-looking actors who have the plastic and dietary habits to be very good looking. Most hot furry femmes are just hot guys/girls with ears and a tail.
Also, you should make boobs more natural instead of just big lumps, and make dicks thicker instead of just thin long broomsticks.
The face too needs to look "human." Muzzles are "snubbed" or made short and puppylike in order to allow human-style facial expressions to occur. Eyes are put to the front on prey animals so that they have the same face as us predatory humans (another reason predatory animals like canines are preferred, their face has the same layout as ours).
The key is to make the character different enough to be furry, yet human enough to be attractive. Zig Zag is, of course, the most famous example of this. If you photoshopped out her head and tail, the remaining body could be applied to almost any anime chick.
This is also why most furry porn artists start out by learning to draw human figures, even if the heads are animals. To do anything different would appear "wrong." The many threads on Lulz where digitigrade feet, animal faces and other feral components have been photoshopped out for being "creepy" are blatant proof of this.
ALL THIS FROM A GUY WHO CAN'T EVEN DRAW A SMILEY FACE AWWWHHH YEAHHHH
The frame is always humanoid in the beginning, then the species is applied on top. But when it comes to the face there must be enough hybridisation for the characters to look appealing. If they're too animalistic, they end up looking creepy and unsexy. Because only a few people are sexually attracted to actual animals.
So human aspects are woven into the animal head - eyebrows, lack of whiskers, sometimes more humanoid lips, and humanoid teeth too. The theory of "how furry" a character is is fascinating and probably pretty complex when you scrutinise it closely enough.
Anyways if you want any more help note me and we'll swap IM information and we can chat about your stuff as much as you like. I'd be happy to help anyway I can.
And maybe eventually I'll worm a freebie out of you ;P
Did you get that xmas e-mail I sent you?
And they're mainly covered by a penis... and technically relatively small... but that's beside the point xD
I won't really say anything about the facials, since most "people" looks different when doing this or that.
Hm... I'm not really in a roll here heh... I'm usually more "useful" ^=^'
You should try experimenting with trying to draw faces difrently or try experiment a bit
I do like it though.