I got bored earlier last month reread "Hypnodiver Kioshi", but I've noticed a few errors and problems in my writing and decided to redo the story a bit.

I fixed some errors, removed excess stuff, redid a couple segments, and added a few things, hopefully to make the story easier to read and at least more entertaining as well.

I have already have a copy of the (soon to be) old version on a document, so if anyone wants to see the old version, I have it waiting somewhere.

I wanted to make sure you guys were informed before I do anything.