That latest story isn't doing so well. And I don't want to sound harsh on myself but it's looking like my worst so far!

But that's good! That means I can learn what I'm good at and improve on what needs fixing! Sad to see no genuine feedback from anyone, really, so maybe I'll get some in the future! I could really use it. Since that's finally out of the way, I think I'll be working on one more commission and my own story with my own plot line!

So if those are shit too, please please please, let me know! Dish out your critiques! I can take it!