What do you like / dislike about my stuff?
7 months ago
Just a little question, looking for some feedback.
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What I dislike: I agree with Pokemon68, sometimes it feels like your drawing the something over and over again. I wanna see more pics of the characters fully nude and getting creampies in breeding holes. ;)
Faces need work
Would also like to see you do different physiques, like chub, muscular, thin, etc.
I also would like to see some feet. Feet and boobs are good combo. But you do you.
What I dislike is, sometimes the "strap" of their clothing seems to cut way too deep in the fatty tissue of the ladies. Making it hurt to look at a bit. A more diverse shapes of the female would also be nice, have you tried different body shapes like the pear? Over time the heads seems to have gotten larger and larger, making the rest of their body smaller by comparison.
Heads/faces need work, kind of hit and miss here for me. I thought about it for a bit and I think the main thing that feels off about the eyes is the pitch black dot pupils, because it feels like they don't look as bad on darker eyes where they're not as noticeable like on Paulina with her dark blue eyes or Pamela with dark brown eyes, but where it's noticeable maybe if the "eye shine" was equally intense to even it out? Not sure, but also they're very sharp and contrasting while the rest of the body has soft shading/rendering, and doesn't seem as bad on the flat color sketches, but then there's no eye shine, hmmm (kinda just ended up thinking to myself there)
Hips/crotch too boxy and attached legs too straight and stick like, but I really think your "Nightclub Guilmon 2" didn't suffer from this and a few others I noticed, once again kind of hit and miss.
Boob veins and freckles. Love em' but maybe there's a fancy brush for the freckles? Kinda seems like you just stipple them on by hand. I can also appreciate some veins on boobs but when they got that under the skin not too visible, translucent, maybe a little thick soft diffused look? *shrug*
Excuse me if it's going too far, but give your dudes some zinc supplements and pineapple juice, would love to see some bigger/thicker loads and those big titties lol
And lastly, I know she's your OC but in my opinion Hilde's nose is too realistic for her cartoony face.
I say this all with love and no hard feelings, always kind of awkward when giving critiques *nervous laughter*
Can't wait to see what you have for us in the future!
Thanks for the detailed comment, you actually made some interesting points!
How would you change's Hilde's nose though?
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/48539750/
So to explain what I like about it: the simplification and removal of the nose bridge lines, the simplification of the nose by removing and ironing out the notch at the tip of the nose and in addition I would soften up and round out the "Batman spikes" on the nostrils, reduce the length of the nostril lines that go in just a bit and then soften up or remove the nose shine, and I think that's it, I hope that makes sense, if not, I DID take the liberty and edited a Hilde piece you did to make sure what I was thinking actually worked, I can send it to you, if you'd like it to go with my explanation
Also if you want my advice with the "faces problem", I'd be happy to give it a similar treatment
Squeek on brother! <:3( )~~
But I'm afraid I'll have to join the chorus... it gets kind of samey. Tall, smol, wide, thin... there are so many more bodies. And accessories! Piercings, earrings, necklaces, sweaters, shirts, pants, skirts, dresses. And as someone who struggles to learn myself, I would love to see more of your unpolished art. I'm not expecting tutorials or something, but I love looking through the scraps-section at different artists.
(oh as well as renamon, but thats just a bias >///>)
The animation works you do have been steadily improving and fun to see as well.
Though I'll say like some others that I would love to see more branching out when it comes to body styles. It's all great but I'd certainly enjoy seeing something more to add!
what I dislike: the trademark square pasties
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32340949/