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Looking for beta readers for a roleplay setting guide
2 months ago
Looking for beta readers! I've got something that's not quite done yet, but could use some feedback on how to develop it further.
This is for a nonfatal vore worldbuilding guide/roleplay guide. It does not use graphic language or describe vore scenes in detail, but it is still very vore-focused. It also has a lot of petplay focus, if that is something that would bother you. If neither of those are a problem for you, great!
This is still being written. It's missing a lot of things - locations, character profiles, example scenarios, some more worldbuilding about technology level and the like, and optional rules for taking vore/petplay/furries out of the setting, among a great many other things. The final product is, if I'm allowed to be ambitious about it, about 4x as long as it currently is. But for now I'm just looking for feedback on what's there so far.
I'm looking for constructive feedback. "I liked X" or "I didn't like X" is nice, but less useful than "I did/didn't like X because of Y".
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This is for a nonfatal vore worldbuilding guide/roleplay guide. It does not use graphic language or describe vore scenes in detail, but it is still very vore-focused. It also has a lot of petplay focus, if that is something that would bother you. If neither of those are a problem for you, great!
This is still being written. It's missing a lot of things - locations, character profiles, example scenarios, some more worldbuilding about technology level and the like, and optional rules for taking vore/petplay/furries out of the setting, among a great many other things. The final product is, if I'm allowed to be ambitious about it, about 4x as long as it currently is. But for now I'm just looking for feedback on what's there so far.
I'm looking for constructive feedback. "I liked X" or "I didn't like X" is nice, but less useful than "I did/didn't like X because of Y".
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This file will be made unavailable in a few days after this posting. Please do not share it around just yet.
The thing I would say from q quick glance at the different none-people. It is a tad idealistic that no amount of unlawful/wildness results in "you forfeited your right to be regenerated, you are a threat to this world and will be put down" Not that I want to see it happen, but there does not seem to be a line that can be cross where the problem is dealt with in prison or whatnot.
Thank you for the feedback!
I remember education was pretty important in civilized parts of the world as well, such as the expectation that children of stock would get one and then be able to choose their living arrangements freely. Was that still important to the setting?
Okay, so children. I need to go over FA's rules with a fine toothed comb to see what I can and can't get away with, but for right now I'm leaving children out of the setting.
OBVIOUSLY, children exist, adults don't just pop into existence fully formed, but... fundamentally, Heartbite is a fetish setting, and the presence of children in such makes people uncomfortable. And I've got enough non-potentially-problematic stuff to write about at the moment, so... I'm just kind of avoiding the topic of children and growing up, as much as I can.
I figure there'll be like, an add-on document later on, that talks about growing up in Heartbite, what childhood is like if you're born as a pet or as stock, etc.