More Astray updates
3 weeks ago
General
I've updated each chapter of my ongoing story project, Astray. These now match the versions I host on my site. These changes include:
None of these changes affect the story much. However, they make it more consistent, polished, and realistic—in so far as a story about lion aliens can be.
*As originally intended, amusingly enough. What can I say, Nevrra is neat and I got distracted, but it's nice using a 'sona that better reflects me.
- Reflecting my handle and ‘sona change from Nevrra to Qrreia*.
- Reducing the time skip after the prologue from two years to one.
- Changing the internal layout and overall size of the Wandering Horizon, the aircraft that serves as a major setting for the story.
- A variety of small tweaks and fixes, all of which are detailed in the full changelog on my site.
None of these changes affect the story much. However, they make it more consistent, polished, and realistic—in so far as a story about lion aliens can be.
*As originally intended, amusingly enough. What can I say, Nevrra is neat and I got distracted, but it's nice using a 'sona that better reflects me.
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