I'd love to hear your opinions! (Comics!)
a week ago
General
Hey folks! I'd love to hear a little feedback from you about my comics.
Vitae - https://www.furaffinity.net/view/56085687/
Third Class - https://www.furaffinity.net/view/62494065/
Both of these are still in progress, I'm still very much carving out a method for working on these. I'm new to making comics. So there will be mistakes and inconsistences while I figure it out. Nonetheless, I want to know what you think of them!
Do you like them so far? What do you like about them?
Are they understandable/readable?
Is there anything you really dislike?
Is the art okay?
Got a favorite character?
Also, I'd like to hear your opinion on what you hope for these comics. Are you interested in story and the characters/world? Do you want NSFW/porn? Gimme your thoughts!
Thank you <3
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They are easy and nice to read.
The art style is really nice. I like how you draw different body types.
I dislike the human enforcer quite a bit...but I guess that was the point.
My favourite character so far is Patchfoot.
I'd love to learn more about the story,characters and the world.
The writing feels very natural so far and the scenes you're building are gorgeous, toes a really interesting line between pretty and bleak. I'm always excited by the NSFW components of your work, but I feel like this one has the potential to weave in storytelling elements as well.
Third Class has felt a little closer to kink fuel at the start, and that's not a slight against it! Definitely feels like you're building up to something more with page 7, but without being able to read ahead, not sure which direction you're looking to take it. Either one would be fine as long as you're doing it with intention!
Yes, I enjoy the "warts and all" depiction of your world that you are sharing. I feel respected as a reader.
Are they understandable/readable?
Yes, on legibility and the pacing is good so far. A lot of showing and not telling.
Is there anything you really dislike?
Nothing yet.
Is the art okay?
Yes.
Got a favorite character?
I'm bias of Merri and Crissi since you draw them the most.
Yes it's simple and understandable.
I dislike hiatus but understand with reason.
Art lovely
Cray, i still like elven race :)
Regarding the themes you explore, I love them, with the master and slave dynamics, submission, etc. I have no problem with the art style; it's very distinctive.