Critique my work
15 years ago
Plz? I want to hear what everyone finds in what I do. Point out every flaw, weakness, strength, whatever.
I would really like to hear some more feedback from everyone.
I would really like to hear some more feedback from everyone.
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When I'm not falling asleep I'll do this for reals <3
Thanks Tooie X3 take all the time you need.
You are already a grate artist, and it's hard to find anything your weak at.
Why don't you tell me things you'd like to work on and I'll see if I can be of any help.
Because at the moment, I can't find any faults in your work what so ever, and all honnestly, our best and worst Critiques are normally ourselves.
I draw all of my figures without using a reference, except for really complicated angles or poses. Sometimes I'll attempt the difficult ones without any help, and the often come out looking godawful. It always stands out to me when they do, and I feel my grasp of anatomy get less confident as I redraw it over and over. That and I can't draw clothes that well. The folds always look unreal. And my poses too, I can't seem to do the casual types of stands most other artists do, they come out too stiff usually. I guess if I used references I could fix that.
I unno. I need to move to the next level.
For figures, how a person stands and whatnot, try drawing people doing acrobatics, this is some of the hardest things for people to draw. A single person standing on his/her own head is sometimes frightening for artists to do, if you want a challenge, this is it!
As for the god awful stuff, trial and error are what makes an artist better, keep on that path and you'll see yourself improve!
(I used to suck at drawing anything cartoonish, but anything real was easy for me, now it's a different story)
As for clothing, what you need is Tailor studies, Pixar did this when putting on Boo's cotton t-shirt from Monsters Inc. They had a tailor come in and explain how cloth would react in different environments and how different cloths hug and fold agents the body.
You don’t really need an actual tailor to come in and tell you what’s right and what’s wrong, reference can help you here too! Look up photos online or better yet, take pictures of random people or yourself wearing the clothing/cloth in question, and use that to help. Jeans I find infamous for problems because it’s hard to get those folds at the knees looking right.
I hope I've been of help.
(i swear, one day, i do a picture that will do you justice ;o; )
(and I await when that comes :D)
I have been trying a lot more expressions lately, mostly as doodles. Watching lots of ren and stimpy for faces XD but color scares me. I can't spot a good color scheme to save my life.
i'd say try some variety, like expressions... dynamic poses... it helps to use a skeleton technique, to come up with nice poses... sometimes really sexy ones just happen... try some bodily distortion... like strange proportions... like large bulky frames, or... tall, lanky.. maybe try multiple characters doing a complicated orgy-type picture.
and you need to put more stuff there ;O miss that shiny black dragon danglies. it's so blatant and aggressive looking
and you need to put more stuff there ;O miss that shiny black dragon danglies. it's so blatant and aggressive looking