Writing Stuff
15 years ago
Good morning everbody (it's in fact 6:56 AM)!
I would like to introduce myself, so...here I go:
My name's Natalie, I'm 19 and I'm living in Germany, currently learning for my Abitur, which is similar to the A-Levels. I'm an author - at least I call myself so - and some of my stories are printed in my town's newspaper (the payment is low). Zora is my favorite character. She's an (artificial), red dragon, formed by the gods out of a ruby (well, that's the cause for her title "Ruby Dragon"). She's my alter ego, if you must know. Well...don't know what to say more. This afternoon, after school, I'll try to write my first English story - the stories you have to write for English in school don't count. I think my English isn't that bad (neither good), but I would appreciate a comment about the writing style, the grammar and the vocab...The protagonists of my story will be Vaporeon and Houndoom, I think (Yes, I looove Pokémon, they are a great inspiration), cause it's a nice contrast...well...that's it! Now i'll make me ready for school (which starts in Germany at 8 o'clock), and I hope you'll like my story. One last thing, ehrrm...I don't know a lot about FA and so I don't know if the Journal is the right place for this introduction, so...help me, if I'm wrong, okay? Thanks <3
I would like to introduce myself, so...here I go:
My name's Natalie, I'm 19 and I'm living in Germany, currently learning for my Abitur, which is similar to the A-Levels. I'm an author - at least I call myself so - and some of my stories are printed in my town's newspaper (the payment is low). Zora is my favorite character. She's an (artificial), red dragon, formed by the gods out of a ruby (well, that's the cause for her title "Ruby Dragon"). She's my alter ego, if you must know. Well...don't know what to say more. This afternoon, after school, I'll try to write my first English story - the stories you have to write for English in school don't count. I think my English isn't that bad (neither good), but I would appreciate a comment about the writing style, the grammar and the vocab...The protagonists of my story will be Vaporeon and Houndoom, I think (Yes, I looove Pokémon, they are a great inspiration), cause it's a nice contrast...well...that's it! Now i'll make me ready for school (which starts in Germany at 8 o'clock), and I hope you'll like my story. One last thing, ehrrm...I don't know a lot about FA and so I don't know if the Journal is the right place for this introduction, so...help me, if I'm wrong, okay? Thanks <3
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Johto. One of the biggest countries in the world of Pokémon, and the one with the oldest history of gods. Lugia, the god of wisdom and trust, and Ho-Oh, the goddess of the pure heart, were both adored all over the land, but especially in Ecruteak City, where both living legends resided in two towers, until Lugia’s were destroyed by a disastrous fire. Since then no one has ever seen them again. But the heat of the summer was a sign for Ho-Oh’s power in Johto. The air glimmered, the ground was dried out as well as the grass which grew on it. The trees around the city were as hard as bones, and the limbs sprawled their twigs out to the sky as they were praying for water. However, there was water. A small lake close to Ecrutaek City resisted the drought by obtaining it’s lifeserum from a subsurface fount. As a result the trees around it were green and the grass was sappy. The air was refreshing as well as the water, cool and undefiled. The little oasis was well hided, as well as it’s inhabitant. The Vaporeon surfaced and drew herself out of the water while fretting a dead Goldeen. But she was no normal Vaporeon, and that was too obviously to overlook it.
Sorry for the double post there.
See, you are fun.
Just to let you know I have been trying to reply to the thread in the forums with an offer for a McChicken, but the computer at work here won't let me, so...yeah. ;)
But no probs. Oh, now that I'm home...*Presents a McChicken.*For you. ^_^
Ah! Glad you like. ^_^
My preferred place is Wendy's though. Not sure if they're any of those in Germany.
I ate too much but it was SOOOOOo GOOOOD. XD
Now, I need to convert that, considering where I live, so...
You are: 5 ft, 4 in around there. I am around 6ft, really, so...1.82 meters.
I weigh about 190lbs.
And are you sure you want to state your breast size? I don't mind to know, but want to keep that PM or wha? ;)
I now have a good mental picture of you. :3
And as you gave me a silhouette, it's fair I show you myself. ;)
http://forums.furaffinity.net/attac.....p;d=1265147716
you look very cute :3 would love to lay in your arms <3 and it's funny how the lamp in the background looks like some kind of ears on your head xP
You don't have to upload one. I can't help but think though...to hold you. <3
And...I never noticed the ears before. I'll think before taking a picture near my ceiling fan now. XD
1. Click on "User CP" at the top of the forums.
2. On to the side, Click on "Edit Profile Picture."
3. Here, scroll down and you will see two options. One is to upload a pic from the Internet, the second uploads directly from your computer. I uploaded my dragon pic from my computer.
4. If you chose the second, click "Choose" and find a pic. Double click that pic and click on the "Save Changes" button.:
If that's what you're asking about, that should help you. :)
Note: I do not finger my laptop. :3
But you think like me there. XD
I like Dolphin. A fitting name, considering. :3
I have a stuffed Dolphin somewhere. Called him Flipper. :3
Haven't named the rest yet. Need to name my Genesis/Mega Drive...
I have my PS3, Wii, and XBox 360 side-by-side. For now...gotta think here...:3
Honestly, I'm just one who knows how to save. Granted, two of them were presents and I split the cost of them, but in this hobby, I have to learn how to save. Working at a bank helps with that. XD
Don't you use the Euro anyway? Not like the dollar will help yo much.
well, if you're working at a bank you should know you can change the doller to Euro xD
Plus, the bank I work at is a small, regional one. Not as much resources as the bigger ones. ;)
well, problem solved ö.ö i buy the things with the original dollar :3 you know? i would say the things are a bit more cheapier then here to counterbalance the difference between dollar and euro
But honestly, even though I work at a bank...I'm not the best with conversion rates. *Sweatdrop.* ^_^
I should mention that because of my birthday, I'll be out for a bit of the day tomorrow, but I'll think about you. ;3
Sleep well, my lovely Zora. *Returns dragon kiss.*
I'm home right now, but we'll be leaving soon. I'll still be thinking of yah.
Honestly, a number of possibilities work, but if I do think of something, I'll share it. ^_^
I applaud you for what you have done. And I will read Endora when I get back. ^_^
But at least it works for you. :3
A bit difficult, plus I have to show the audience she is a raccoon & all. XD
However, on your end, I think you did well with Vaproeon. You showed her as confident, but friendly. :)
Thank you kindly ^____^ the new character approaching will be a bit different, though :3
Really? I'll be interested in seeing that. ^_^
Hehe, trust me, I would never forget that. And I never forgot you. <3
*Nibbles on your neck a little.*