Submissions -- Digimon Story
18 years ago
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The Storytelling of Delan - Revived and Updated - New Stories Added! Will Update Occasionally! Hey, I decided to start a Digimon story after probably 8 years lol. (I can't remember the last time I started one, but it never got anywher enear finished.) That's probably because 1) I was overthinking the digivolving process (a new one, that is, using crest wands, and one character who would be using it and also becoming a half-digimon, and 2) I think I had way too many characters from the Adventure Season 2. (The one with digieggs, and armor digivolving). It used "Davis" in an Alternate Universe type of Digimon adventure, becoming a half digimon.
So I decided to just start a new story, with the idea that an adult gets sucked into the Digimon world -- a 20 something cubbish guy. Leomon is the first one to encounter him, and ... well, the story itself isn't written much further yet.
But I vaguely plan to have Leomon and "Robbie" which the cubbish guy is called, be attracted to each other eventually.
I've also designed a small digivolving system which hopefully will be a bit more simpler this time around, along with an enemy that they have to tackle now and then.
Hope people are enjoying it so far -- the first chapter, that is.
I do enjoy feedback and would like to know whether my story 'style' works, or if it's something that I need to improve, or whatever you can think about. Just no comments like "Oh that royally sucks!" (Which doesn't help me whatsoever! :) )
Suggestions and Feedback where they could go, or do is welcome as well. That may still be incorporated in future chapters, maybe.
:)
It doesn't touch on any of the Digimon serials at all, other than 'vague' comments on their history. It roughly takes place a couple decades after all the adventures for Digmon. So if you're hoping for a cameo by any of the original crew, Sorry. :( (Although THAT could be subject to change if it's like the descendant of one of the originals. I havent quite made my mind up on it.)
Any ideas what to call the series? ;)
So I decided to just start a new story, with the idea that an adult gets sucked into the Digimon world -- a 20 something cubbish guy. Leomon is the first one to encounter him, and ... well, the story itself isn't written much further yet.
But I vaguely plan to have Leomon and "Robbie" which the cubbish guy is called, be attracted to each other eventually.
I've also designed a small digivolving system which hopefully will be a bit more simpler this time around, along with an enemy that they have to tackle now and then.
Hope people are enjoying it so far -- the first chapter, that is.
I do enjoy feedback and would like to know whether my story 'style' works, or if it's something that I need to improve, or whatever you can think about. Just no comments like "Oh that royally sucks!" (Which doesn't help me whatsoever! :) )
Suggestions and Feedback where they could go, or do is welcome as well. That may still be incorporated in future chapters, maybe.
:)
It doesn't touch on any of the Digimon serials at all, other than 'vague' comments on their history. It roughly takes place a couple decades after all the adventures for Digmon. So if you're hoping for a cameo by any of the original crew, Sorry. :( (Although THAT could be subject to change if it's like the descendant of one of the originals. I havent quite made my mind up on it.)
Any ideas what to call the series? ;)
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