Digimon: Take Three.
18 years ago
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The Storytelling of Delan - Revived and Updated - New Stories Added! Will Update Occasionally! Hello. :)
I'm still busy at work with the Digimon fanfic -- Digimon: Crystal Destiny. It's been slow in spots, more or less because I'm not quite sure what should happen next, or some parts need a rewrite. The writers out there probably know what I'm talking about.
I'm currently working on the 3rd part of Chapter 6: "Rest Stop & Trades". That should probably 'conclude' that chapter, and move on to a new one. It's not quite finished yet, I am guessing about 1/2 way done with it.
My question is -- are you guys favoriting it because of the sex (which is always a bonus), or because of the story-writing in general? I know it probably doesn't matter in this case, because both aspects seem to be pretty good to me as well.
I honestly want some opinions on it -- even if it's just "Your description needs work" "The dialogue isn't quite right." etc. etc.
*shrug* I don't mind if no one does give me opinions like that, but I do want to try to better my writing as much as I can.
Thanks again for reading it so far :)
I'm still busy at work with the Digimon fanfic -- Digimon: Crystal Destiny. It's been slow in spots, more or less because I'm not quite sure what should happen next, or some parts need a rewrite. The writers out there probably know what I'm talking about.
I'm currently working on the 3rd part of Chapter 6: "Rest Stop & Trades". That should probably 'conclude' that chapter, and move on to a new one. It's not quite finished yet, I am guessing about 1/2 way done with it.
My question is -- are you guys favoriting it because of the sex (which is always a bonus), or because of the story-writing in general? I know it probably doesn't matter in this case, because both aspects seem to be pretty good to me as well.
I honestly want some opinions on it -- even if it's just "Your description needs work" "The dialogue isn't quite right." etc. etc.
*shrug* I don't mind if no one does give me opinions like that, but I do want to try to better my writing as much as I can.
Thanks again for reading it so far :)
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