Phew, barely made it. Stupid writers block, striking right in the middle. =(. I tried to go through line by line and proofread, but I'm sure I missed some things. Ah well, 'tis a skill I must practice! =)

Jag looks like he put up a pretty solid entry, too. At least I've got a small break (or a *long* one, if I lose =P), but I also really want to know who won. XD. Ah well, I shall survive.

I think my story-writing is getting better, though. Perhaps one day I'll be good enough to feel I can take commissions, but I think I want to get a larger body of work done, and perhaps get better-known, before I even attempt that. =) I've certainly had one or two people tell me I could and should do that, though...