something in my mind-freestyle poetry
18 years ago
I am going to freestyle poetry, just to let my thoughts free....
There ain't no bullet wound
but i can tell you are dead
there ain't no mark or bruise
but i know that you've bled
we don't need x rays
or medicine to start
because nothing can cure
a broken heart
you sit there on the floor
forever lost the feeling
staring at the door
your memories are reeling
of the special times you had
of the love that you both shared
but now that they are gone
you wish you hadn't dared
i gaze at you, so down, lifeless
you cry your tears, painfull, shapeless
the moments are gone, drifted away
your love is gone, but here you stay
this is for anyone who has lost someone that they held dear
I am thankful i have someone to love
There ain't no bullet wound
but i can tell you are dead
there ain't no mark or bruise
but i know that you've bled
we don't need x rays
or medicine to start
because nothing can cure
a broken heart
you sit there on the floor
forever lost the feeling
staring at the door
your memories are reeling
of the special times you had
of the love that you both shared
but now that they are gone
you wish you hadn't dared
i gaze at you, so down, lifeless
you cry your tears, painfull, shapeless
the moments are gone, drifted away
your love is gone, but here you stay
this is for anyone who has lost someone that they held dear
I am thankful i have someone to love
golden_tigress
~goldentigress
.... {{sniffle}} UWAAAAAA even though Ive got Panda.... this is beautiful. You are the best lyricist {{is that what you call them?}} I think I'll ever know {{pouncehug}}
slukaa
~slukaa
OP
:) thanks, i just made it up on the spot, but i was in the mood. hehe, Lyricist sounds good. *returns hug*
OOsarovakOO
~oosarovakoo
Thoughts and mind is racing while one read this beautiful words, and i hope that you will never experiance them...
slukaa
~slukaa
OP
thanks ^^ I don't think i will *big hug*
anarchiemo
~anarchiemo
*bows* 1 of the best poets in the world
slukaa
~slukaa
OP
Thanks! Freestyling is fun when you are in the mood ^^
anarchiemo
~anarchiemo
i know, it awsome.. YAY 4 POETRY
slukaa
~slukaa
OP
agreed, most of my recent stuff has been for someone special :D
anarchiemo
~anarchiemo
haw haw haw. *big smile*
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