Oh wow. Putting up my first story went way worse than I had thought. First, the indents and double spacing went poof, then I realized that the thoughts that I had given the main guy, Jon, aren't italicized either, in the comments portion. Now it just looks sloppy. I'll be lucky to get any feedback at all. I wonder how everyone else does it. I'll ask the pros when I am not tweaking out on coffee and trance music.