Hey people, it's been a while since I've shown real activity but I've been doing a lot of writing on other sites and I'm just wondering what you think of my writing.

Is it good enough for commissions?

The reference I can offer is the speeddog story. Other than that, I'll post a new story in a few seconds which'll be more abstract so you can check out that style.

Please, please, pretty, please comment and let me know what you think. Your opinion is important ;)