It's okay (especially since I'm more of Saiyan Saga fan) but there are some things that need tweeking. The watermark and audio bits, like you said, need to be taken care of. Besides that the consistensy of the sequences were a bit off (i.e. Vegeta getting ready to hit Goku over the head with hands and then suddenly he's on the ground). It's understandable since making an AMV of that fight with the right sequences and music is hard without repeating.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6Vl.....MV%20Metallica You've probably seen this one since it's REALLY old (like 2000 kind of old) but there are certain sequences I like about it. I'd probably would lose one flickering effect so it wouldn't be obnoxious but then again this is real old. I'm sure the guy who made this is MUCH better now.

P.S. You better start putting Metallica and Foo Fighters songs in your AMVs or SO HELP ME...!*clenches fist* XD

It's pretty good, but I don't know the work that goes into this sort of thing so I can't really judge all that well... Still, I like it ^_^ and it's a good song. Now you need to use the Richard Cheese version of "Down with the sickness" in an AMV :P

http://www.megatronsarchive.info/vi.....len_Angels.wmv

I found this a little while ago, I thought it was really well done ^_^ just in case you want some resource material or anything. It might just be that I'm a total transformers geek but hey :P

Keep at it man ^_^