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A bit of creative writing
15 years ago
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`*:;,．★ ～☆・:.,;* Moon Prism Power, Make Up! *;,.:・☆～ ★．,;:*` And as he lay down, wings took form around him, a myriad of colours and hues in their feathers the infinite pallet of the rainbow. Folding elegantly around his weak and weary body, they offered themselves a shield from the world and its harsh reality. And he wept. Soft and quietly, never letting the world know of the sorrow which weight heavy in heart and tortured his waking mind. But the wings. The wings would never vanish, even if only in his mind’s eye. Never waver or offer harsh word, but only offer themselves as a silent impenetrable shield for which to express his emotions behind. And as he nodded off to sleep, the wings grew even tighter around his exhausted frame like a mother’s arms, bonds loosened for only a fraction of their grip as he fell into blissful nothingness.
I thought I would try my hand at a bit of emotional release through writing. This last week has been extremely rough on me with finals, personal trials and thoughts of future plans. And Just to put people at ease, no, Im not considering self harm or other drastic action, I'm just going through a bit of an unexpected transition in my life, but hey, not all changes are bad.
Feel free to tell me what you think :D
I thought I would try my hand at a bit of emotional release through writing. This last week has been extremely rough on me with finals, personal trials and thoughts of future plans. And Just to put people at ease, no, Im not considering self harm or other drastic action, I'm just going through a bit of an unexpected transition in my life, but hey, not all changes are bad.
Feel free to tell me what you think :D
Your writing is gradually getting better fuzzy~
HOWEVER! Regardless of that, the word usage is really good, and it shows you're learning how to describe and express better. That's the point.
You have to stop relying on spell check. It is not full proof at all. Those things can't even catch when you use the wrong There/their/they're or to/too/two.