Hmm, this is a sticky situation (in a non sexual way xD) so I'm going to answer this in the most honest way possible. I'd also like to comment on the fact that you're wanting other people to set price to your artwork. Standards/opinions vary person to person so also keep that in mind.

I think you should charge for simple things but keep it cheap. When you become better and/or well known, up the price ever so slightly. Personally, I don't have the money to buy too many commissions, though when I do they are on the relatively cheap end of things... but that's do to being a poor college student.

You could also set prices and see how people respond. If they're too expensive drop them to something people will find more reasonable.

:3 Hope that helped!

:p but im not asking for prices just whether or not my art is worth buying :P

though i fully agree with you about keeping prices fairly low.

Now I really hope you won't take this the wrong way... i'm not trying to be mean, only truthfull and honest.

Personally I wouldnt pay for art like this, to me it just looks a little too "back-of-a-sketchbook" to be worth mounting and thats the grade by which I buy my art.

This doesnt mean you need to improve just to meet my standards and I'm sure some people will find this very nice, it's just for me a peice needs to be good enough to put on my wall if i were to buy it. (sorry if this is too harsh or upsets you I really dont mean it and will give many im sorry hugs)

As for improvements I really dont think it would take much to make it worth money. Maybe neaten up a bit on your line work and colouring, also even just a little practice on depth would be a good start

not hurtful at all :) this is why I want the opinion. Thank you :)

im still gunna give you loads of apology hugs *pounces and squeeses tight*