Eeeeepic stuff. Liked it immensely.

Good job as a whole, the band's drummer kept in beat, your bass is simple, yet recognizable and not too disruptive, the lead guitarist does his job well. For an on-the spot performance, (me being a critic) I gotta say you wrapped it up pretty nicely.

I'd love to see you get into a recording studio - Real potential in the singer's voice!

As a first impression. This is mostly the guitarists music and not me or the drummers. We hope
to have a more rounded sound by the end of this. :3

but thanks man.

CRITIQUE MAN HERE TO SAVE THE DAY!! :D All observations are based on shitty audio quality :P

Harmony - Your singer had a similar problem in that I did at RF last year. Gotta get closer to that mic :P Then again, its hard to hear vocals in general in bigger venues. Your drummer also seems very shy of being loud.
Lua - Singer's either got a lot of pauses, or he has major issues keeping time :/
Busking & Rum - All good except your singer should back away from the mic when belting it out, to keep a good flow in volume.
Gray Areas / Ramona - Both seem good :3 nothing I can pick out.
Friday the 13th - I absolutely loved the heavy energy from this one :3 hard to tell in any music if there's energy unless you're there, but I can really hear that you're blowing the roof off with this one :3

I also noticed that you only use one or two fingers to press the strings. Gotta work on scales with all your fingers, gurl! :P

Not a bad thing (though personally not fond of it) but I noticed your drummer holds their sticks a bit far out, which although I've seen plenty of other drummers do it, it lacks control. However, I found it kinda cool that your drummer jumped on guitar :3

also, doesnt look like that big of a venue, due to the small stage o.o

In general, I love it :3 You guys have a lot of feeling and energy in the music, which is what counts most in a rock show. The music itself is well written compared to most underground bands out there. Great job! :D

I never said it was a big venue first off. :P

secondly, you need to keep in mind that our drummer isn't a full time drummer. She
just plays the drums because she's the best out of the three of us. XD

Lua, the singer is a chick and because my dad didn't record it, she explains at the
beginning she isn't very good at singing and guitar. Why we let her play that is a
personal matter altogether.

I do use all my fingers! when they are needed. XD

nice :P well tell your drummer that she can gain a lot more control if she held it a bit higher up so that an inch or two is showing past her hand, and hold it by the thumb and index finger. That's the pro way :3

Keep up the good work :3 I'd love to hear more from you guys :D