so i wrote a song.

rather, the lyrics/melody, i can't write music for shit.

this was my saturday evening project when my original plans fell through.

this is my very first piece of completely original material! i'm a little self-conscious about it, because part of me thinks it's okay and part of me thinks it's completely awful. it's still very much a work in progress (especially towards the end) but i'd really appreciate some feedback! this was fun and i'd like to continue doing it :) maybe find someone who can actually write music so i can have accompaniment.

(i apologize in advance for how off pitch this gets... my voice is SO out of shape it's ridiculous. plus i haven't been treating it very well lately :p)

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5590217

love it? like it? hate it? it's bad and you should feel bad? let me know :) i want to get better!

(also if you'd be interested in doing accompaniment for this, note me! there may be financial compensation involved... or perhaps the beginning of a beautiful partnership *wipes away a single tear*)