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Please Ignore Last Remark
14 years ago
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This is a re-post from my DA page.
"Well... not the previous journal.
I realized I've been lead astray and that my own actions have hurt me as a writer!
"Now to further reiterate why I am not posting any of the revised works is that I want to have my work published." March 19th
"You will not see any new postings of my novel here on DA. This does not mean I am not working on it. I intend to make money off of my work." January 14th, 2010
Although may of you that I know in person can recall that I have made statements like this for sometime.
I realized that while not posting any of my primary works on DA would have insured that nobody would have seen it until I got published. But that has left me with very little feed back that I need to make my writing better.
Recall this: The first paragraph of the posted chapter one
"Kyo shook his head to rid it of a thought, then brushed his sapphire hair out of his blue eyes and back behind his pointy ears with a gloved hand. Kyo was not only a human but also part elf. The gloves he wore bore the many marks of use, and were finger cut."
That was posted June 18th 2007.
Here is the first paragraph of the current chapter one
"Kyo looked up at the ceiling in his bedroom, idlely drawing circles on the ceiling, a large middle one, two slightly smaller ones, overlapping the middle and then three smaller circles, one on the middle, one on either side. He then idlely drew elvic runes for dark, soul, and light, leaving the smallest circles blank."
A massive jump in quality would have only been caused by practice and feed back. I feel that as a writer I could improve more that what practice can give me, I will be posting my current writing on here. This means that prepare for some new writings to appear shortly."
"Well... not the previous journal.
I realized I've been lead astray and that my own actions have hurt me as a writer!
"Now to further reiterate why I am not posting any of the revised works is that I want to have my work published." March 19th
"You will not see any new postings of my novel here on DA. This does not mean I am not working on it. I intend to make money off of my work." January 14th, 2010
Although may of you that I know in person can recall that I have made statements like this for sometime.
I realized that while not posting any of my primary works on DA would have insured that nobody would have seen it until I got published. But that has left me with very little feed back that I need to make my writing better.
Recall this: The first paragraph of the posted chapter one
"Kyo shook his head to rid it of a thought, then brushed his sapphire hair out of his blue eyes and back behind his pointy ears with a gloved hand. Kyo was not only a human but also part elf. The gloves he wore bore the many marks of use, and were finger cut."
That was posted June 18th 2007.
Here is the first paragraph of the current chapter one
"Kyo looked up at the ceiling in his bedroom, idlely drawing circles on the ceiling, a large middle one, two slightly smaller ones, overlapping the middle and then three smaller circles, one on the middle, one on either side. He then idlely drew elvic runes for dark, soul, and light, leaving the smallest circles blank."
A massive jump in quality would have only been caused by practice and feed back. I feel that as a writer I could improve more that what practice can give me, I will be posting my current writing on here. This means that prepare for some new writings to appear shortly."
