your art is too good. makes me look bad. X3

but in all seriousness... i honestly dont know what to say. as you've progressed, you keep fixing every weakness that i notice, and i think you have run out of them, at least to what my level of art knowledge can pick up on. the only thing i can say is that it seems like you're getting more story-heavy and doing less pics. but i'm sure that's not on purpose XP

indeed, thats not by design, its just the way things worked out because of my work schedule

i sorta agree with what luke said, you're leaning more towards stories, and less away from art. Not that its a bad thing. Your style has progressed so much since youve joined FA that I bet it takes fur fucking ever to finish even 1 thing of art (in fact I know it does Ive talked to you on skype enough to know that)

But your stories are amazing, very detailed, you pull the reader in making them want more! please write more M/F stories thou! (theres a dick here I was lied to!!!)

Your art... I wish you would do more backgrounds yourself then just slapping in a background... expand more on your own backgrounds is what I would like to see more of. I know people dont look at the backgrounds much but it adds to your talents then just copy + paste + add shading.



maybe start doin stuff like rei does, group stuff! MORE BODIES!!

To be honest, I'm not really much for stories now, but your visual arts have come quite a ways. I don't know of anything specific, other than keep practicing good work up.

your story's suck naww just kidding your stories are awesome and need very little work, work I cannot explain, cept that there can be improvements.

*thumbs up* You want critique, you've got it!