Well, being a writer myself (soon to be writing more like an actuall writer should), I read a lot of other people's stuff here. Now this applies to a great some more than others, but why must every story jump into the sex after like, half a page? I mean, sure its supposed to be porn but still, it would keep me reading some more if the text really grabbed me. Like the peice I am working on now for a contest. I want to show that there can be a real story behind just penis in vagaygay. It will be a story for how my new character Nanu came here, and it will most likely be two parts. Anyways, I just wanted to ask. Is the porn so important that you destroy plot all together? If you want porn there a pictures. A story should be enjoyed, it should take you places a picture cant. But thats just my opinion. What do you think?

Plot? Or mindless sexings that you get off to within the first ten or so lines and then just not read the rest?