ok so I just placed the first page in my scraps so everyone can give me ideas and the rest will hopefully be done soon.

here is the link to it in my scraps if you wanna read it so far, and yes i know some parts of the storyline are already given away in this, but they only say what the girl intends to do when she gets home, not neccesarily what will happen next

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6625636/