Well, it's my first REALLY pornographic story for the people of FA, and thus, I'd really love to know what you guys think about it... I don't know if they're any good (I'd imagine I'd be a bit biased... one way or the other, anyway) and I'd love to know what I need to improve on. All I want is to get better and I can't do that without feedback...

... oh, and if you ever get ideas for the Fetish Friends, feel free to suggest them! I might even write a story using one of your suggestions! Who knows?

... man I sound preachy... why don't a stick in a 1-800 number for you to send money to so you can "continue to view such high quality programming"... yeah, right.