Become Open
13 years ago
Becoming open...
The constant tidal wave...
This emmersive embodiment of..........
I'm a star....
Amongst billions of others...
I strive to shine...
This illuminated shell..
My steadfast composure...
My passionate confident stride...
Infused and smothered...
With a coat of contented happiness..
As I hold with paws my heart within..
I've unclutched myself...
From this earth...
Where I'm always left..
As the cut of my blade...
I will sever myself..
As roots of a decaying world..
Sheerness will reflect...
As the mind locks and hones forward..
As I hold with paws my heart within..
The constant tidal wave...
This emmersive embodiment of..........
I'm a star....
With an ambitious distinction..
Amongst billions of others...
I strive to shine...
I am perfect at being me..
This is my only path...
Can't you see...
As I hold with paws my heart within..
The constant tidal wave...
This emmersive embodiment of..........
I'm a star....
Amongst billions of others...
I strive to shine...
This illuminated shell..
My steadfast composure...
My passionate confident stride...
Infused and smothered...
With a coat of contented happiness..
As I hold with paws my heart within..
I've unclutched myself...
From this earth...
Where I'm always left..
As the cut of my blade...
I will sever myself..
As roots of a decaying world..
Sheerness will reflect...
As the mind locks and hones forward..
As I hold with paws my heart within..
The constant tidal wave...
This emmersive embodiment of..........
I'm a star....
With an ambitious distinction..
Amongst billions of others...
I strive to shine...
I am perfect at being me..
This is my only path...
Can't you see...
As I hold with paws my heart within..

AnalyticFrequency
~analyticfrequency
OP
its not really dark..it is but its not...its pretty much telling others that it dont matter who you are or what you have become, as long as you love your self..and you love who you are, then thats all that matters " i strive to shite " meaning every time you try...to make your self better, there is always someone trying to bring you down...that you are only one star mixed in with everyone else...its about trying to make it in this world, even though others might not like what you are doing. im glad you read my poem! thank you

AnalyticFrequency
~analyticfrequency
OP
its a good poem ^.^ i put my feelings into everything i do..if im sad...i write stories or poems if im happy i draw my art ^.^