>More Pudgie Pie
Yeesssssssssssssss.

:3c

"So by now, most of you are well aware of my fat fetish."

I'm pretty sure that people that know of your fat fetish account for roughly 98% of your watchers.

Anywho, I'll read the thing because I appreciate fat ponies and literature.

Hahahaha, just as planned.

Tell me what you think!

Just read it.

Must say, it was pretty good. Descriptions were vivid, characters were very in character I felt... it's a good fic all in all. Wasn't expecting that ending at all.

The one thing I don't like is something that I find is a common error in fics, being that at times it felt like you tried to use more creative wording. Now there's nothing wrong with that, but sometimes a simple order of words serves just as well as a complex one.

Still, all in all a good fic. I rate it 4.5 stars out of 5.