"The Undying: The trap of life."

terrible idea, but it's an idea. I'll think of some more. ^^;

ok but don't overburden yourself

A parallel world for the lhi-aans linked to the real world.

I am looking for a title idea, not story.

Well, what are you planning to do with the title?

"The evolution of immortality." Just shooting off the bat.

hmm...not much of a vive to it...but it's a good try though.

Savior of the unwashed organics.

wait...I think I got a name...

???

LE-1

Lifelike entity.

Drika: *faints*

Omega: Lhi'aan is actually a nickname for LE-1

Here's some great quotes from a certain wise man named Homer to help inspire.
"Trying is the first step toward failure"
"Snakes... Nature's quitters."
"Stupid like a fox!"
"Oh I wish I wish I hadn't killed that fish."
"Heheheh! Glupid gloropope."
"Mmm... Forbidden donut."
In response to being asked if he boarded up the door yet. "What for? Oh... Zombies. No."
"The doll's trying to kill me and the toaster's laughing at me!"

too bad the poet was not very bright.

All because he tried to break the world record for most crayons stuck up a person's nose. One got lodged in his brain.

He didn't have a good father figure and he lived a dull childhood.

Farm life'll do that to ya.

yep...and a dad who's drunk all the time.