The Story of Raine (Rough draft)
13 years ago
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Her story begins with a happy fusken with her lovely parents. She was 14 at the time that her parents had ditched her. Although she thought her parents were killed. Every night her parents would supposedly go to work and come home with just enough to make it through the day. Raine had one younger sister and one older brother. Her sister's name is Eris and her brother's name is Vulcan (May change his name later).
One day Raine entered her house and put down her back back in her room. She called out, "Mom? Dad? Eris? Vulcan? Where are you guys?" She looked all throughout the house and stumbled upon a note saying, "If you ever want to see your family again, then come to this building at 7pm. DON'T BE LATE OR THEY GET IT!" Raine felt perspiration drip down her face as she froze there for 10 minutes, staring at the note on her kitchen table. Raine snapped as she ran to the silverware drawer and packed a couple of knives in her pocket. She grabbed her hoodie on the way out as she ran through her neighborhood, looking for this shady building that she had to go to. As she came up on a big, shady house, snuck up to a close-by fence. She looked around to see if the coast was clear and then she peeked through a window on the side of the house. It was only 5:00pm, but it was dark enough to where no one would most-likely see her. She had made sure her tail was covered into her hoodie, that way no one would see her bright red tail.
As she slipped around the back of the house, she spotted a door. She quietly opened the door and slipped in. It was so dark that she couldn't see a thing. Sadly she had left her flash light at home. "Darnit..what was I thinking." She muttered quietly to herself. She waved her paws around, sliding a long the wall. She felt some sort of wooden object in her way. It was like some kind of ledge, she thought. She felt on top of this ledge to find a hard glass object. Then she found a hard plastic long object. She knew this feeling..it was a flashlight! Just what she needed! :D
She turned the flashlight on and aimed it around the room to stumble upon a tall cat staring at her with a grumpy look. She froze for a good minute or two and then reached for her pockets as the cat jumped up and leaped at her. The cat stood on top of her and took away her knives and nailed her to the floor. The knives pinning the arms of her jacket to the floor. He flashed the light in her face as she squinted, the light burning at her eyes. She growled as the cat said, "I'm not here to hurt ya, ya mutt! I'm here to tell you about your parents." She stopped growling as she watched the cat unpin her and dart away to make sure of his safety.
The cat turned on the house lights as she got a good look at the tall cat. His honey colored eyes, gray fur and long cat tail that curled at the top. She noticed a scar going down left eyebrow, stopping at his eye. She heard a slam towards the front of the house. In walked a muscular, tall cat. "CHESTER! CHESTER!" He yelled. "WHERE THE FUCK ARE YA?!" The tall cat with the scar responded, "I'M IN THE LIVING ROOM! WHAT DO YA WANT?! I don't want to do this damn thing, boss!" Raine figured out that the tall cat was Chester and the other cat was the boss.
Raine backed up a little as Chester watched her. "Relax, girl. We ain't gonna hurt ya." Raine felt nervous and afraid. Her ears flattened on her head as she began to growl again. The boss came into the room and looked at the cowardly fusken. "Aww, isn't that cute." He said in a sarcastic tone as he went over to Chester and gave him a letter. Chester asked, "What's this boss?" The boss said, "What do you think it is?! You forgot to grab it at the factory, ya dimwit!" Chester read the letter...
TO BE CONTINUED!
One day Raine entered her house and put down her back back in her room. She called out, "Mom? Dad? Eris? Vulcan? Where are you guys?" She looked all throughout the house and stumbled upon a note saying, "If you ever want to see your family again, then come to this building at 7pm. DON'T BE LATE OR THEY GET IT!" Raine felt perspiration drip down her face as she froze there for 10 minutes, staring at the note on her kitchen table. Raine snapped as she ran to the silverware drawer and packed a couple of knives in her pocket. She grabbed her hoodie on the way out as she ran through her neighborhood, looking for this shady building that she had to go to. As she came up on a big, shady house, snuck up to a close-by fence. She looked around to see if the coast was clear and then she peeked through a window on the side of the house. It was only 5:00pm, but it was dark enough to where no one would most-likely see her. She had made sure her tail was covered into her hoodie, that way no one would see her bright red tail.
As she slipped around the back of the house, she spotted a door. She quietly opened the door and slipped in. It was so dark that she couldn't see a thing. Sadly she had left her flash light at home. "Darnit..what was I thinking." She muttered quietly to herself. She waved her paws around, sliding a long the wall. She felt some sort of wooden object in her way. It was like some kind of ledge, she thought. She felt on top of this ledge to find a hard glass object. Then she found a hard plastic long object. She knew this feeling..it was a flashlight! Just what she needed! :D
She turned the flashlight on and aimed it around the room to stumble upon a tall cat staring at her with a grumpy look. She froze for a good minute or two and then reached for her pockets as the cat jumped up and leaped at her. The cat stood on top of her and took away her knives and nailed her to the floor. The knives pinning the arms of her jacket to the floor. He flashed the light in her face as she squinted, the light burning at her eyes. She growled as the cat said, "I'm not here to hurt ya, ya mutt! I'm here to tell you about your parents." She stopped growling as she watched the cat unpin her and dart away to make sure of his safety.
The cat turned on the house lights as she got a good look at the tall cat. His honey colored eyes, gray fur and long cat tail that curled at the top. She noticed a scar going down left eyebrow, stopping at his eye. She heard a slam towards the front of the house. In walked a muscular, tall cat. "CHESTER! CHESTER!" He yelled. "WHERE THE FUCK ARE YA?!" The tall cat with the scar responded, "I'M IN THE LIVING ROOM! WHAT DO YA WANT?! I don't want to do this damn thing, boss!" Raine figured out that the tall cat was Chester and the other cat was the boss.
Raine backed up a little as Chester watched her. "Relax, girl. We ain't gonna hurt ya." Raine felt nervous and afraid. Her ears flattened on her head as she began to growl again. The boss came into the room and looked at the cowardly fusken. "Aww, isn't that cute." He said in a sarcastic tone as he went over to Chester and gave him a letter. Chester asked, "What's this boss?" The boss said, "What do you think it is?! You forgot to grab it at the factory, ya dimwit!" Chester read the letter...
TO BE CONTINUED!
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