We're friends, I can't answer this.

Well, the only thing I dont like are boobs on Pokemon but thats just me.

It's me too, but that's more from me being a super faggot.

Sometimes your anatomy gets kind of funky, usually when dealing with foreshortening and perspective stuff.

Thanks, working on that right now.

Well. . . If I absolutely must name something. . . Hmm. . . All I can think to say would be that there's only one time when smut bothers me, and that's when I'm given the impression that it's smut just for the sake of being smutty. . .

Which, when I looked through the gallery, I did wonder a little bit about. Though I honestly couldn't tell you how to avoid giving that impression beyond to suggest that you avoid the porn star grin.
So. . . Yeah, go ahead and disregard this.

The faces you draw could use a bit more practice.

Thanks. Yeah, I do need to work on faces, a lot.

A lot of elements of your individual pictures are sometimes a tad "off", mostly concerning facial structures, or certain elements of anatomy, and very rarely, color-- let's get nitpicky as all hell look at a few examples.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9236228/ Look at the head of the penis. It looks like someone cut the tip of it down the middle. That's not how penises are supposed to look! Should be more of a dome.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9170234/ There are numerous things in this picture that could've been avoided to make it more pleasing to the eyes. Particularly around the muzzle area and the vaginal region. For clarification, here is a version I have touched up because I have an unwarranted sense of self-superiority. http://puu.sh/1r40B

I still kind of think there might be something off in the picture, possibly to do with the rightmost leg, but I'm not sure whether or not that's just me. Whatever!

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9022226/ You demonstrate terrific coloring/shading in this image, however the overall output of the subject in question, the Gorebyss, looks lumpy as all hell. Don't do it that.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8926318/ In an unrelated note, I find this picture incredibly hilarious because you've provided us with an incredibly good-looking and personalized setting for the background--- and then there's two Pokemon humping just off-center. This gives the subtle impression that the room, rather than the Pokemon, is meant to be the subject of the picture. Which is hilarious as fuck. 5/5 no problems here.

(I know. Rule of thirds. Yadda yadda. Back to critique.)

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8907036/ The thing that's off here is that the penis seems to be tapering off at the end.

Human dicks don't do that.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8879843/ Now here's something. One thing that really bugs me in this pic is the beak; specifically the lower section. The way it is drawn gives it the both the appearance that it isn't a part of the whole beak, and that it's also at a very odd angle. Here's another presentiment of my unwarranted self-importance incredible artist $k!llz that can hopefully speak for itself: http://puu.sh/1r4iQ

My example could clearly be better, but I'm fucking tired that's just a general guideline for you to work upon. Moving on.


For my last critique (and this is hardly fair because it's a relatively old pic), here's this: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7937038/

Some general guidelines:

*Latias' face appears to be slowly melting.
*With the general direction of her body, Latias' neck and head COULD theoretically be positioned in that way, but it's hardly practical; for clarification, here is what an overhead view of the picture in question would look like: http://puu.sh/1r4Dz.

Okay, maybe that didn't turn out as helpful as it could've. Let's try again. http://puu.sh/1r4Iw

There we go. Hopefully that clears things up a bit!

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If you should take away anything from this more-than-brief discourse, it would be to make sure to focus on making things look more consistent, functional, and aesthetically pleasing.


Wouldn't kill you to use some saturated colors every once in a while either.

I wonder if the neck of the Latias would be a real issue. Her neck could also be 'build upon' easier-bending cartilage instead of normal bones or just have a similar neck like owls.

As usual you made me laugh, cry, and wet my pants all at the same time.

Thanks, I'll try to work on all of that.

;v; march on, brave soldier.

As a new friend I have no quarrels with criticizing so here I go,

The anatomy placement is sometimes a little off and it makes the images weird and unproportional to the bodies.

I'd say.. if anything.. the line art seems too random in the widths and consistency. You should take more time on it I suppose? But it's your style, so anything goes..

If you show me some examples I might have a better idea of what you're trying to say.

What about....your using of Pokémon who are drawn by 3947284274294t9261 artists as well? |=(:/

Just do your thang