Need Your Input on a Comic Project!
13 years ago
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Hope everyone is enjoying their holidays, whether it be vacations or just chilling out with friends/family, or whatever floats your boats!
I hope those of you who've bought Coffee Meet or my other assorted comics are enjoying them!
I have several comic projects in development. Many of them are split into multiple installments and will be long term projects with more of a story focus. Think of them as lead-ups to my (non-porn) Londoners webcomic project that will be the big story involving all those characters. I also have some non-Londoners comics in the works too. HOWEVER...I need some input on one possible comic project.
I will be doing comic projects featuring Puzzle, Diamond, Sebastian, Dax and Olivia (not all in one, mind you), and another comic or two featuring new characters, but I also want to work in another Nightshade/Patrick comic.
So I would like to hear what you'd like me to do if I were to make another Nightshade/Patrick comic. I'm at a loss what to focus on for the story and theme, however. I need some opinions and ideas of what people are interested in seeing, and that may spur my brain into figuring out something I could fit into a roughly 20-page comic.
Anything you would like to see me explore in the comic? Any themes? Let me know in the comments below. Thank you!
I figured out what I'm going to do. Thanks for the input and ideas everyone! :3
I hope those of you who've bought Coffee Meet or my other assorted comics are enjoying them!
I have several comic projects in development. Many of them are split into multiple installments and will be long term projects with more of a story focus. Think of them as lead-ups to my (non-porn) Londoners webcomic project that will be the big story involving all those characters. I also have some non-Londoners comics in the works too.
I will be doing comic projects featuring Puzzle, Diamond, Sebastian, Dax and Olivia (not all in one, mind you), and another comic or two featuring new characters, but I also want to work in another Nightshade/Patrick comic.
So I would like to hear what you'd like me to do if I were to make another Nightshade/Patrick comic. I'm at a loss what to focus on for the story and theme, however. I need some opinions and ideas of what people are interested in seeing, and that may spur my brain into figuring out something I could fit into a roughly 20-page comic.
Anything you would like to see me explore in the comic? Any themes? Let me know in the comments below. Thank you!
I figured out what I'm going to do. Thanks for the input and ideas everyone! :3
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Did they visit each others families?
Did they ever visit each others' families. Their parents that is.
How about them having a disagreement over something/
Might even hold a commission for "guest" apperences in a costume of their choice.
As for patrick and nightshade, I still think patrick should do something as aggressive to nightshade as she did to him. He knows how she likes it, why not give her what she wants?
* Well, unless you chose to go as far as to depict Patrick's conception --X=P
(Also, Kaddy, Happy New Year to come, and I hope you're not offended that I changed my icon!)
Oh I'm not offended at all! I'm pleased you used it for so long X3 Happy (impending) New Year!
Not sure if that's good. X3
Oops! Looks like Train and I had the same brainwave at the same time. Or I is slow; anyway, I'll go and blame The Karate Kid II on TV for distracting me. I'll stand by my suggestion three asterices ago, though!
#1. How about something tribal..a kind of witch doctor thing were Patric ends up in Nightshade's body and vice versa, I think patric woudl find it interesting not only to feel teh female body, but also claws, fangs, the anatomy to eat meat...while Nightshade might crave steak bit can only eat veggies? Also their sense of smell woudl be dramatically different
#2. How about Body paints? nightshade like a Giraffe? Patrick as a Jackle? or maybe rubber?
#3. How a bout something in a woodland...snowy....a camp file..a tent, a sleeping bad..shared bodily warmpth? Nightshade hunting, and Patrick forraging for vegetation....
2) Body paints (glow in the dark) is pretty sexy, though I could imagine it being part of a bigger idea.
3) Patrick eating bark off trees like in Bambi...wait...no don't shoot him!! XD Funny you mentioned the body warmth thing though - I did have one idea for a comic where there's a power outage and Pat and Night snuggle up and sexy times ensue ;p
In short, a funny sexy comic ;3
what did you have in mind for le comic of yours?
have you done a Space setting before? or maybe a western. or slap both of them together for a Space Western. Steampunk? Cyberpunk? Dieselpunk?
that's all I got.
2) Don't know if Patrick has an inner geek side but what about him going to a convention and trying to get her to come along and persuading her to dress up in costume or something.
3) A special date for an anniversary or him making a big commitment such as asking her to move in with him.
4) Having an ex of one of theirs show up and cause some difficulties.
5) I do like the suggestion above where one of them gets sick and the other nurses them
6) Have them experiencing a holiday get together/party like New Years or St. Patties day out at the bar.
2) He aspires to be a journalist, and knows a LOT about pop culture. Have you ever seen the show Gilmore Girls? The characters in that drop pop culture references all the time. Pat's like that, only he tends to explain the history to the reference, much to his friends' boredom XD I think Nightshade would punch him if he made her go to a convention in costume :P
3) That's pretty cute! I think that may be a better key moment in Londoners, though (it would be a big step for Nightshade to welcome him into her home, or vice versa).
4) I want to say something about that, but major spoilers XD
5) Yeah I think that's cute too XD
6) I'm saving the party theme for the Puz/Di/Dax/Seb comic, though I think this comic could potentially be set during Xmas or New Year's ;3
Good input/ideas! :D
Although now I can't get rid of the picture of Patrick and Nightshade cuddling in a cabin with a nice warm fire when suddenly LEATHERFACE kicks down their door :P
Yes, Nightshade is more dominant than Patrick. She wears the pants (boots?) in the relationship. Pat grew up being put down a lot, so he has a resistance to authority, but with Nightshade he realised it came down to his respect for the authority figure. He respects and admires her, so he is okay with her being the dominant one. The predatory nature also is a big part of this. You may have read Dangerous Bedroom Behaviour, and in that (spoilers! The comic came out two years ago, nearly XD) Pat switches things up and turns dominant on Nightshade. I think their relationship has some power exchanges, and he will 'play fight' with her, and turn the tables on her and be the dominant one. So I guess he puts up a fight, but he never wants to upset her. It's all kind of a game of power struggling.
One other thing, and I don't want go to into too much detail for spoiler territory, but Nightshade may like being submissive at times, if she feels secure. She won't hesitate to care for Patrick when he's down, and vice versa.
Something to do with a kingdom and a king.
Some commoners comit a crime and they would be arrested.
There would be a trial and the sentence is to fight some beast
In a dungeon or be sentence into the dungeon where the beast resides.
You can probably guess there won't be killing and eating...wink wink, nudge nudge. XD
I don't themes like that often. *shrugs*
Sounds like something Alistair would do. He's kind of a cruel ruler, so I could see him throwing people into a dungeon with a ravenous monster XD
I don't really know some of your characters honestly.
I'd have to read some more of your stories hoenstly. <:C
When I read through I just threw out an idea. XD
Another thought I had would be a book club or social club gathering that the usual characters
You have already. The 2 new characters would get involved with them b/c they would like to interact. All the while the social gatherings become.......yeah you probably would guess the same outcome.
They would eventually become permanent members after the outcome.
Again, I don't know the characters that much. Just throwing it out there. <:3 Apologies for that. XD
Heh, the Olivia story will focus around a sex club. Ooh la la :B
Thanks for the input!
You're welcome.
Best of luck as well. ;3
(I didn't care for the way the males in that last post/excerpt involving her were talking about her -- I'm just a big softie.)
--X=P
Unexpected sex? Patrick or Nightshade doing something most likely important and the other one showing up...
Unexpected sex (second idea)? They could mess around with each other, by using sex to surprise each other in unepxected situations, like Patrick driving somewhere and Nightshade going for a blowjob and then Patrick taking his revenge while she's doing the dishes for example...
Someone else(Another of your character or just a random one) has to come in their house(do they have a house together? Otherwise in the house of one of the two) and they both do quick naughty moves while trying to hide it from the third random person. Kinda like teasing and it could end with pressure release.
That is all for now.
Pat and Night have separate apartments, but Pat spends a lot of time at her place because his place is kinda shoddy (low income housing - he's new to London and has trouble finding work. Nightshade meanwhile, has been there for years and has a good income).
That last idea is a good one! I wonder if the third party should be Sebastian, or Glitter or Puzzle. Maybe the third party catches them during the climax but doesn't say anything (they don't notice him/her). Oh, I think I've got an idea now :3
2) Patrick is trying to do some freelance writing on some sort of entertainment/sci-fi type of thing. Maybe going into detail about something like Doctor Who or Torchwood. Anyway, He's at it for a long time and Nightshade is bored so she starts messing with him under his desk eventually leading to them going at it at the desk and the article accidentally being sent ending with some sort of line like asdklfa;sjiof;odivdsld fjvowehia;odnklv.
3) Nightshade loses a bet on a soccer match between Arsenal and Aston Villa as such she has to go to a sci-fi convention dressed in a sci-fi costume. At first she's having none of until she decides to go as a sexy Lt. M'ress and while there decides help Captin Patrick boldly go where no Star Trek captain has gone before.
I could probably think of more but I have to mail bills out and burn dinner.
1) Angry sex. Like, instead of play wrestling turning rawwr, they have sex while still mad. So it's sort of a wrestle for dominance, or a 'I'll show you unfunfunf' 'No, I'LL show you" 'You're gunna walk funny, fucker''walk funny like you do in those stupid pants' "OH NO YOU *moan* didn't!"
2) Maybe they try on various outfits together. Either Nightshade is just trying on various sexy clothes while Patrick watches (and gets increasingly wound up until he snaps), or they try on different things, Nightshade perhaps making him try on girly things or things She would find hot too, with the inevitable otucome.
3) The two start talking about past sexual experiences (with other people). Perhaps they are trying to excite one another, or they are having phone sex because they are separated and neither are good at "oh I touch your boob" so it turns into story time, or perhaps it's sort of mutual masturbation with story time. It could even start as one of those weird conversations like "Yeah I had sex in a VW Bug once" "HOW?" and then they start either trying to out-do one another, or just recounting fun anecdotes.