I went back and re edited Part 1
12 years ago
In case anyone watched me for the chastity story series I'm working on I re edited the first part. Zeeka told me it was perfect except for some structure errors and the space bar didn't press a few times on my laptop. So since I just finished editing the last part I figured I'd go through it again to fix it.
It should read much smoother now and any of you who haven't read it that know me. You shouldn't read it *blush*
I'll post the last part in a little while, maybe I'll wait until friday. That's when everyone is on anyway.
It should read much smoother now and any of you who haven't read it that know me. You shouldn't read it *blush*
I'll post the last part in a little while, maybe I'll wait until friday. That's when everyone is on anyway.

Lorakahn
~lorakahn
Awesome.