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Cleanup On Aisle 3
12 years ago
My FA page was in dire need of a clean up. I couldn't believe how old some of my submissions were and how long its been since I last contributed anything to the site.
Didn't get rid of everything though, even my old photoshops and badly drawn sketches. Just moved them to scraps as thats what they really are, scraps from a different time.
Updated my info and changed my featured submission to my most recent work. Hopefully I'll add more to make this page more interesting more frequently then I have in the past.
My focus has changed significantly over the years too I've noticed, I've moved away from the visual arts to something I always thought I was bad at. Writing. I wish I could have thought of something more digified to write about than pokephilia but fate has lead me here after accumilating some debts I've been asked to repay.
I really should remember to ask my friend if it'd be okay to credit him with inspiring Pokemon guide series. The reason I haven't added an author to the guides is I'd really like to put in his character as being the one writing them since I only wrote the first one because he asked me to and wanted a prop for second life.
Didn't get rid of everything though, even my old photoshops and badly drawn sketches. Just moved them to scraps as thats what they really are, scraps from a different time.
Updated my info and changed my featured submission to my most recent work. Hopefully I'll add more to make this page more interesting more frequently then I have in the past.
My focus has changed significantly over the years too I've noticed, I've moved away from the visual arts to something I always thought I was bad at. Writing. I wish I could have thought of something more digified to write about than pokephilia but fate has lead me here after accumilating some debts I've been asked to repay.
I really should remember to ask my friend if it'd be okay to credit him with inspiring Pokemon guide series. The reason I haven't added an author to the guides is I'd really like to put in his character as being the one writing them since I only wrote the first one because he asked me to and wanted a prop for second life.
Eckon
~eckon
Might I suggest reading some of my works? Just because it's poképhillia doesn't mean it has to be pure smut. For example, my latest personal story, "The Thorn of a Rose" Is about a relationship between a typhlosion and a human, but, the closest it gets to sex is some naked cuddling in a shower, and a stating they had engaged in intercourse before. Try expanding past the heat theme. (I'm zangooselover from agnph, I own rights to the story.)
Silvermane21a
~silvermane21a
OP
I'll be sure to give it a read as it sounds very interesting and I very much appreciate your advice and will take it to heart.
Eckon
~eckon
Like I said, it isn't very sexual. And it's 16,000 words long. I see so much trash here on furaffinity, the main reason I AM watching you, is because you write better than probably 80% of all of furaffinity. Don't take grammar lessons from my texts though...English teachers hate me...I kinda....make up rules and words as I go >.>
Silvermane21a
~silvermane21a
OP
Sex isn't everything, just because I just basically wrote two guides dealing with the subject doesn't mean its all I care about. I just read the first part of your story so far and I found it very enjoyable. I liked seeing things through the eyes of the pokemon rather than just the trainer and I found the way you choose to express Soren's feelings and affections towards Vandell and vice versa to be quite genuinely heartwarming. And really, those are the best kinds of stories as they'll stick with me far far longer then any sexually oriented piece would. Also alot of subtle things in your story, also let me know that I'm on the right track on certain subjects, as there are people such as yourself with a like mind. Little things like how you decribe Soren moving closer to Vandell campfire when he was still too shy to show what hes feelings. Or the way you had Soren testing the waters to see what he could get away with. There were also alot of little important things I realized I missed or regret omiting when condensing my guide which I now realize was important to include and should never have done so. While there was some things I may criticize you on concerning grammar, it didn't detract from the story. There was alot of things your story also taught me which I was completely ignorant of, like what to actually expect inside a pokemon center. it has been far too long since I've engrossed myself in the lore and I realize its these little details which are ultimately going to be important to know down the line. I look forward to reading the second part, but not tonight as I am bushed after three solid days of research and writing.
