I've just read a delightful little story about a girl and an ooze. Made me squirm in my seat in many fun ways. A little word repetition here and there, such as using shoulder twice in a sentence , but that is just me being nit-picky. Xp

Flash Fiction #6: Gone Horribly Right, by -  vyrat
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9886526/

The Qilin's Eggs
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9709576/

Just looking around for things to put myself into a good erm... *ahem* excited mood? Trying to get as worked up as possible to fuel my writing P: