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Well...That's kind of disappointing.
12 years ago
Since I began writing TF stories, which is two weeks ago, I thought people would become more interested as more story comes.
But now that I sent my second story involving the piranha TF, I see that most people don't seem to care, unlike the first story involving horseflies.
I find it disappointing since I thought the first one was too grotesque, disgusting and cheap to write and that the story was just a bad excuse to put scatophilia, gore, sexual assault followed by somekind of rape with eggs going out of one creature to another one, mixed together.
But maybe that's the problem with the second one, the fact that I cared more about writing an actual story, even as clichéd as it was at some moments, than actually caring about the main reason for why I was writing it. In the end, the transformation moment length for 1 page 1/2 out of 12 pages. The ending was pretty disappointing too I think. And even there, it was softer than the first story and I don't know about the tension if it felt like there was more or less than the first story.
What do you think personally?
But now that I sent my second story involving the piranha TF, I see that most people don't seem to care, unlike the first story involving horseflies.
I find it disappointing since I thought the first one was too grotesque, disgusting and cheap to write and that the story was just a bad excuse to put scatophilia, gore, sexual assault followed by somekind of rape with eggs going out of one creature to another one, mixed together.
But maybe that's the problem with the second one, the fact that I cared more about writing an actual story, even as clichéd as it was at some moments, than actually caring about the main reason for why I was writing it. In the end, the transformation moment length for 1 page 1/2 out of 12 pages. The ending was pretty disappointing too I think. And even there, it was softer than the first story and I don't know about the tension if it felt like there was more or less than the first story.
What do you think personally?
